谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误.Yesterday was Monday.Mary was time to on duty.When she was sweeping the floor.she found a watch on the floor .Then she picked up the watch and went to the teacher's office.Marytook out the watch to the

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谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误.YesterdaywasMonday.Marywastimetoonduty.Whenshewassweepingthefloor.shefoundawatchont

谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误.Yesterday was Monday.Mary was time to on duty.When she was sweeping the floor.she found a watch on the floor .Then she picked up the watch and went to the teacher's office.Marytook out the watch to the
谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误.
Yesterday was Monday.Mary was time to on duty.When she was sweeping the floor.she found a watch on the floor .Then she picked up the watch and went to the teacher's office.Marytook out the watch to the teacher ,The teacher said Mary was a good student.

谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误.Yesterday was Monday.Mary was time to on duty.When she was sweeping the floor.she found a watch on the floor .Then she picked up the watch and went to the teacher's office.Marytook out the watch to the
Mary was time to on duty 改为 It was Mary's turn to be on duty
其他都很好,

修改一下It was Monday yesterday ,and Mary was on duty .

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