各位英语高手看看这篇英语文章是否有语法上或其他问题：My plan for the winter vacationMy plan for the winter vacationFirst of all,I will do three more important things in the winter vacation.The three more important things are

各位英语高手看看这篇英语文章是否有语法上或其他问题：My plan for the winter vacationMy plan for the winter vacationFirst of all,I will do three more important things in the winter vacation.The three more important things are
各位英语高手看看这篇英语文章是否有语法上或其他问题：My plan for the winter vacation
My plan for the winter vacation
First of all,I will do three more important things in the winter vacation.The three more important things are do some sports,do some exercises,and last one is read some book.They can help me broaden my knowledge.
I will get up at half past eight.And then,do my homework one hour.Everyday,I will take 3 hour to do my homework.After lunch,I will do some English or Math exercise.In the afternoon,maybe I will run in the park,swim in the swimming pool,read books in the library.In the evening,I will watch TV,surf on the internet,and so on.Sometimes,I will go shopping with my friend.I will buys some books,food,and stationary.
This is my plan.I will try my best to do this things.

各位英语高手看看这篇英语文章是否有语法上或其他问题：My plan for the winter vacationMy plan for the winter vacationFirst of all,I will do three more important things in the winter vacation.The three more important things are
My plan for the winter vacation
First of all,I will do three important things in the winter vacation.First,I will play some sports,and then I would like to do some exercises,and the last one I will do is to read some book.I think they can help me broaden my knowledge.
I will get up at half past eight every morning.And then,I will do my homework for an hour.Everyday,I will take 3 hours to do my homework.After lunch,I will do some English or Math exercises.In the afternoon,maybe I will go running in the park,or go swimming in the swimming pool,or read books in the library.In the evening,I will watch TV,surf on the internet,and so on.Sometimes,I will go shopping with my friend.I will buys some books,food,and stationery.
This is my plan.I will try my best to do this things.
改好了,总的来说还是很好的.只是有一些拼写错误,如stationery,单复数错误之类的.还有就是英语里面要多用一些连词.并祝你天天进步!

你的时态全错了 笔试计划吗？
应该是一般将来时 而不是一般时态

and last one is read some books
will take 3 hours
剩下的.. ..看着办吧 注意 可数名词 要加 S