麻烦懂英语的帮我看看这文章有没有错误Falling in love at an early age is a fault,but it is normal.The most important is how to deal with it.If we deal with it carelessly,we will be sad in the future and will feel it is a shame.So I ho
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麻烦懂英语的帮我看看这文章有没有错误Falling in love at an early age is a fault,but it is normal.The most important is how to deal with it.If we deal with it carelessly,we will be sad in the future and will feel it is a shame.So I ho
麻烦懂英语的帮我看看这文章有没有错误
Falling in love at an early age is a fault,but it is normal.The most important is how to deal with it.If we deal with it carelessly,we will be sad in the future and will feel it is a shame.So I hope everyone who is a student can face feelings wisely in order to enjoy the seasons in the sun.
麻烦懂英语的帮我看看这文章有没有错误Falling in love at an early age is a fault,but it is normal.The most important is how to deal with it.If we deal with it carelessly,we will be sad in the future and will feel it is a shame.So I ho
介是你自己写的还是改错文章题呢...
我觉得有些地方用词不太恰当 但又不能说有语法错误
puppy love is not right, but it is a normal thing in the process of growing up. the most important problem(此处缺少主语了 应加个名词) is how to deal with it. if we tackle with it carelessly, we will be sad in the future and will regard it as a shame in our lives. so i hope everyone who is a student can handle feelings wisely in order to enjoy the seasons in the sun.
本人水平有限呐 要我按照你的意思改改 也就这样啦..~~~~(>_<)~~~~
没有错，但是表达有点，，，啰嗦哦，我再改改，谢谢指点failing in love , at early age, is a fault, but it is (more than) normal. the most crucial is , go without saying , how to deal with those sentiment. if dealing with such fee...
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没有错，但是表达有点，，，啰嗦
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第二句The改为What,或者important后面加thing; sad最好改为regretful; “and will fell” 中的will去掉嗯。那您觉得写的怎么样啊用词和语法靠慢慢积累的,关键还是多学习。这篇文章是一个外国作家写的,可以借鉴一下: http://teens.lovetoknow.com/Young_Love (可能观点略有所出入,不过我更加认同本文作者的)嗯，我去看...
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第二句The改为What,或者important后面加thing; sad最好改为regretful; “and will fell” 中的will去掉
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呵呵~都是高人