英语小短文,检查语法书写错误,I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other people which focus on the paper.The restaurant possesses a beautiful name which is called the Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant becau

英语小短文,检查语法书写错误,I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other people which focus on the paper.The restaurant possesses a beautiful name which is called the Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant becau
英语小短文,检查语法书写错误,
I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other people which focus on the paper.
The restaurant possesses a beautiful name which is called the Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant because of its location next to the famous West Lake.We family were invited the restaurant and enjoyed a nice meal,including dongpo meat,xihu fish and delicious buffet .The meal was so tasteful that we all felt an tremendous honor of being invited to enjoy the meal.
So I am happy to recommend the restaurant to other people who like enjoying food and feel native custom of Hangzhou .Look forward to your good taste in the West Lake Restaurant.
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英语小短文,检查语法书写错误,I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other people which focus on the paper.The restaurant possesses a beautiful name which is called the Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant becau
I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other people which【which用得不对,因为是人物的先行词,这里我建议把other people which换成those who会更高级】 focus on the paper.
The restaurant possesses a beautiful name which is【删去which is会更简洁明了】 called the Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant because of its location next to【of its location next to改为it is located next to】 the famous West Lake.We family were invited 【添加一个to】the restaurant and enjoyed a nice meal,including dongpo meat,xihu fish and delicious buffet .The meal was so tasteful that we all felt an tremendous honor of being invited to enjoy the meal.【这里的being inveited to enjoy the meal出现有点多了,有点繁琐,应改为feeding our stomaches heavenly.】
So【so换成Therefore】 I am happy to recommend【用suggest,一个单词用得太多老师会疲倦的】 the restaurant to other people【other people还是换回those】 who like enjoying food and feel 【feel改成feeling】native custom of Hangzhou .Look forward to your good taste【taste换成journey】 in the West Lake Restaurant.
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第一行which改为who
第四行we改为our，invited后面加to

语法的话更改如下：
第一行which改为who
第三行which is 可省略可不省略
第四行we改为our，invited后面加to
第六行an改为a
倒数第二行feel改为to feel the
建议还是重新组织一下语句，看起来不太地道

I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other peoplewhich (who)focus (focuses) on the paper.
The restaurant possesses (has) a beautiful name which is called the...

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I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other peoplewhich (who)focus (focuses) on the paper.
The restaurant possesses (has) a beautiful name which is called the Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant because of its location next to the famous West Lake. We (Our) family were invited (加上to) the restaurant and enjoyed a nice meal, including dongpo meat, xihu fish and delicious buffet . The meal was so tasteful that we all felt an（去掉an） tremendous honor of being invited to enjoy the meal.
So I am happy to recommend the restaurant to other people who like(likes) enjoying food and feel(feeling) native custom of Hangzhou . Look forward to your good taste in the West Lake Restaurant.

括号前是需要改的词，括号内为改后的词。中国式英语。建议重写、

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　I write this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper.
The restaurant possesses a beautiful name -Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant , for its location which next to famous West Lake. Our...

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　I write this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper.
The restaurant possesses a beautiful name -Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant , for its location which next to famous West Lake. Our family were invited to it and enjoyed a nice meal, including Dongpo's braised pork ,West Lake fish and delicious buffet. The meal was so daintiness that we all felt tremendous honor for being invited.
So I am happy to recommend itto other people who enjoyfood and native custom of Hangzhou . Look forward to your arrive .

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