学霸们进来帮忙找找错误或提一些意见啊!My good friends and II have three good friends.They are Tian Yunjie,Wang Yani and Han Xiaoyu.Tian Yunjie is a lovely girl.She has long hair and big eyes.She likes drawwing but I don't like it.Bec
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学霸们进来帮忙找找错误或提一些意见啊!My good friends and II have three good friends.They are Tian Yunjie,Wang Yani and Han Xiaoyu.Tian Yunjie is a lovely girl.She has long hair and big eyes.She likes drawwing but I don't like it.Bec
学霸们进来帮忙找找错误或提一些意见啊!
My good friends and I
I have three good friends.They are Tian Yunjie,Wang Yani and Han Xiaoyu.
Tian Yunjie is a lovely girl.She has long hair and big eyes.She likes drawwing but I don't like it.Because I think it is broing ,Wang Yani is a beautiful girl.She likes singing and dancing.I also like them.Because it is very interesting for me.And she study very well.Han Xiaoyu is a beautiful girl ,too.And she is good at playing the piano.She likes music very much.But she study is not very well.I am a quiet girl.I like reading books,swimming and watching movies.
I love my good friends very much.
学霸们进来帮忙找找错误或提一些意见啊!My good friends and II have three good friends.They are Tian Yunjie,Wang Yani and Han Xiaoyu.Tian Yunjie is a lovely girl.She has long hair and big eyes.She likes drawwing but I don't like it.Bec
使用了简单的从句；文中用词稍显贫乏,另外请注意单词拼写的检查；文中很少出现过渡词和衔接词；请注意分段.
Because I think it is （broing ）===boring
And she（ study） very well===三单==studies
But (she )study ===her
is not very( well)===be后用形容词===good
同样的句型和词语用太多了,可适当转换
第一句my good friends and i 什么意思 狂汗
讲到tianyunjie时 drawing拼错了 讲wangyani study要用第三人称
she study very well.应改成 she studies very well.当主语为单数第三人称时，谓语动词要用单三 式。
另外，she study is not very well. 应 改为her study is not very good 把 study看成名词。
drawwing→drawing
broing→boring
第一个study→studys
第二个study前的she→her