求高手批改英语作文帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.Should We Help StrangersWhen i was a child ,my parent told me that helping strangers is our traditional virtue.In this new era,things seems to be more complicated than be

求高手批改英语作文帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.Should We Help StrangersWhen i was a child ,my parent told me that helping strangers is our traditional virtue.In this new era,things seems to be more complicated than be
求高手批改英语作文
帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.
Should We Help Strangers
When i was a child ,my parent told me that helping strangers is our traditional virtue.
In this new era,things seems to be more complicated than before.Many people became not believing that faith any more .One day,i was so astonished when i heared that a boy was sued by and old laddy's daughter for his kindhearted.The boy helped the old ladddy when he saw a dog was attacting she.This kind of things happened every day on the world.The good guy helping strangers been asked to take the responsbility if the victim can't find the real wrecker.
In my opinion,we need to think about how to protect ourselves when we intend to help strangers.

求高手批改英语作文帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.Should We Help StrangersWhen i was a child ,my parent told me that helping strangers is our traditional virtue.In this new era,things seems to be more complicated than be
things seems to be .seems ---seem
people became not .people do not believe in.
heared.heard
when he saw a dog was attacting she.when he saw a dog attacking her
happened.happen

Should We Help Strangers
When i was a child ,my parent told me that helping strangers is our traditional virtue.
In this new era,things seems to be more complicated than before.Many people do...

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Should We Help Strangers
When i was a child ,my parent told me that helping strangers is our traditional virtue.
In this new era,things seems to be more complicated than before.Many people don't beilieve it (句子更通顺）any more .One day, i was so astonished when i heared that a boy was sued by an old lady's daughter for his help(kindhearted是形容词额）.The boy helped the old lady when he saw a dog was attacthing her(很显然的）.This kind of things happened every day in (介词错了）the world. The good guy helping strangers was(语法错误） asked to take the responsebility if the victim couldn't(虚拟） find the real wrecker.
In my opinion,we need to think over（这里用考虑比较好） how to protect ourselves when we intend to help strangers.

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