My name is Da Ming.My birthday is the 25th of December.It’s the Christmas day.You know it’s also the birthday of a scientist Newton .He is a prodigy.So I have a clear head .Too.I am a girl with short hair and I wear a pair of glasses.It doesn’t
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My name is Da Ming.My birthday is the 25th of December.It’s the Christmas day.You know it’s also the birthday of a scientist Newton .He is a prodigy.So I have a clear head .Too.I am a girl with short hair and I wear a pair of glasses.It doesn’t
My name is Da Ming.My birthday is the 25th of December.It’s the Christmas day.
You know it’s also the birthday of a scientist Newton .He is a prodigy.So I have a clear head .Too.
I am a girl with short hair and I wear a pair of glasses.It doesn’t mean that I am a bookworm.In fact ,I don’t like reading books.I’m very naughty and dreamy.
There is the blue sky with white clouds .
I like the sky that NO.2 Middle school has.
If god gives the wings to me.I will be glad to fly in this beautiful sky.
We’re very lucky to be in the Class 14.
We will fighting.
My name is Da Ming.My birthday is the 25th of December.It’s the Christmas day.You know it’s also the birthday of a scientist Newton .He is a prodigy.So I have a clear head .Too.I am a girl with short hair and I wear a pair of glasses.It doesn’t
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第一段有点罗嗦,直接写
I was born on the Christmas day.即可
初中生写得不错了~~~
"I am a girl with short hair and I wear a pair of glasses"可省略第二个I,不必重复使用
I am a girl with the name of Da Ming. I was born on the Christmas day which is the same day of Issac Newton, the Great scientist. Tell you a truth, I think I have a similary part between us, that is w...
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I am a girl with the name of Da Ming. I was born on the Christmas day which is the same day of Issac Newton, the Great scientist. Tell you a truth, I think I have a similary part between us, that is we both have a clear mind.
The one who has short hair and wears glasses is me, you may be fooled by my look and think I am a bookworm. In fact, I don't like reading books, instead I am naughty and dreamy.
I am a student of No.2 Middle School, I love the azure sky and the floating clouds upon my school, and I dream to have a pair of wings so that I can fly in this beautiful sky.
I think we're very lucky to be in the same class of 14.
We will do our best, Trying.
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