英语高手帮我找找语法错误This semester I read "Three Fires Ringers" this novel.I am attracted by the plot.This is a famous work which I most like.The article author has moved me by his unique idea.The story winding strange is extremely exc

英语高手帮我找找语法错误This semester I read "Three Fires Ringers" this novel.I am attracted by the plot.This is a famous work which I most like.The article author has moved me by his unique idea.The story winding strange is extremely exc
英语高手帮我找找语法错误
This semester I read "Three Fires Ringers" this novel.I am attracted by the plot.This is a famous work which I most like.The article author has moved me by his unique idea.The story winding strange is extremely exciting.Let the reader and the leading character together laughter,anger,sorrow,and happiness,enters in together this beautiful story with the leading character.This article caused me to understand friend's importance.
This story description 17th century France,politics fights for power and profit is contradictory layer on layer.The main man-power is a French boy,he good simple and honorable is intelligent,saves time and time again own friend from the danger,breaks cardinal's plot time and time again.Speaks of here to be able not but to mention his three friends - three fires ringer:Arab League Dose,Pohl Dose,with Allah Mesa.Arab League Dose,Pohl Dose,Allah Mesa is three extremely good friends,they are honest,bravely may do not hesitate all prices for the friend,but also has the gentry demeanor,how speaks of knows the leading character,that may really be section of fortuitous encounters,really it may be said does not hit is not acquainted with one another.He had no intention to affront these three fires ringer separately,they for the honor had with the leading character duel,leading character to have to brace oneself accept.The original leading character prepares bring death,who knew cardinal's bodyguard,they have overwhelmed with numerical strength,must with three fires ringers duel,leading character then has joined one side fire ringer this,like this everybody with Fights.The result they by win,but come to an end,also was thinking this fight melted everybody each other misunderstanding,has become the friend which is friends with extremely.He passed through also has joined the flintlock team diligently,such three fires ringer had known the good friend,the leading character,four people henceforth was be together,shares joys shares sorrows.Everybody henceforth accepted has revolted against the cardinal the character...
The story also in light of this launches.Author's vivid description later fight,the excellent writing level will contrast the leading character together,Arab League Dose,Pohl Dose,with Allah Mesa,these four individualities totally different four people.Read this novel I also to obtain very many advantage,by the real man three gangs,everybody needed to help,the friend could give oneself helps,liked these four friends to help mutually,altogether tided over the difficulty,also was precisely this his gate can walks from a danger and the difficulty.Moreover,the human must prove oneself must prove by the practical action.The leading character also was thinking so finally only then turned flintlock team's party chief.
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英语高手帮我找找语法错误This semester I read "Three Fires Ringers" this novel.I am attracted by the plot.This is a famous work which I most like.The article author has moved me by his unique idea.The story winding strange is extremely exc
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This semester I read "Three Fires Ringers" this novel(没这种说法,换成the novel Three Fires Ringers). I am\\(was) attracted by the plot. This is a famous work which I most like. The article author （The author of the novel, article不指小说）has moved me by his unique idea. The story winding strange is extremely exciting (这句话啥意思?). Let the reader and the leading character together laughter, anger, sorrow, and happiness, enters in together this beautiful story with the leading character(\\这句话啥意思?且没主语). This article caused me to understand friend's\\ importance. (This novel showed me the importance of friends.)
This story description\\ 17th century France, politics fights for power and profit is contradictory layer on layer(\\这句话啥意思?). The main man-power is a French boy, (The protagonist is a French boy,) he good simple and honorable is intelligent,(\\ who is quit naïve, honest, and intelligent,) saves time and time again own friend\\ from the danger, breaks cardinal's plot\\ time and time again (saved his own friend from danger and made the cardinal's intrigues exposed ). Speaks of here to be able not but to mention his three friends(\\这句话啥意思?) - three fires ringer\\: Arab League Dose, Pohl Dose, with(\\and) Allah Mesa. Arab League Dose, Pohl Dose, Allah Mesa is\\ three extremely good friends, they are honest, bravely may do not hesitate all prices for the friend, but also has the gentry demeanor, how speaks of knows the leading character(主角：the protagonist), that may really be section of fortuitous encounters, really it may be said does not hit is not acquainted with one another (\\句子的确长,只可惜没有逻辑,我也没看懂). He had no intention to affront these three fires ringer separately(\\这句话啥意思?), they for the honor had with the leading character duel(\\), leading character to have to brace oneself accept.(\\The protagonist had to accept the duel from the three fires ringers for their honor, though he was not deliberate.) The original leading character prepares bring death, who knew cardinal's bodyguard, they have overwhelmed with numerical strength, must with three fires ringers duel, leading character then has joined one side fire ringer this, like this everybody with Fights. (\\这句话啥意思?)The result they by win,(\\They won eventually.) but come to an end, also was thinking this fight melted everybody each other misunderstanding, has become the friend which is friends with extremely.(\\In the end of the story, he became good friends, as they found that the fight was just caused by misunderstanding) He passed through also has joined the flintlock team diligently, such three fires ringer had known the good friend, the leading character, four people henceforth was be together, shares joys shares sorrows. Everybody henceforth accepted has revolted against the cardinal the character... (\\这句话啥意思?)
The story also in light of this launches. Author's vivid description later fight, the excellent writing level will contrast the leading character together, Arab League Dose, Pohl Dose, with Allah Mesa, these four individualities totally different four people. Read this novel I also to obtain very many advantage, by the real man three gangs, everybody needed to help, the friend could give oneself helps, liked these four friends to help mutually, altogether tided over the difficulty, also was precisely this his gate can walks from a danger and the difficulty. Moreover, the human must prove oneself must prove by the practical action. The leading character also was thinking so finally only then turned flintlock team's party chief.
最后一段我没有读,因为你的错误实在是太多了.不要勉强写长句,先用短句保证正确吧!
1, three fires ringers是什么?这个标题你自己查查修改吧
2,\\表示前面绝对有语法错
3,很多地方不知所云,你完全是字面改写的吧!记住要有主语和谓语才能叫句子,还有每两个句子之间有且仅有一个连接词
4,如果你愿意等的话,你把中文发上来,我下周日帮你看看.（现在实在没时间,你倒是给我发个消息就行了）

对不起,帮不了你

..... this is not about grammer....

别的不说,三个火枪手这本书应该是:
The Three Musketeers