帮我看看英语作文有没有那里错了~谢谢了哥哥姐姐Dear friendsI'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.Sports is important for us.my favorite sport is basketball.It not only make me happy,but also I c

帮我看看英语作文有没有那里错了~谢谢了哥哥姐姐Dear friendsI'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.Sports is important for us.my favorite sport is basketball.It not only make me happy,but also I c
帮我看看英语作文有没有那里错了~谢谢了哥哥姐姐
Dear friends
I'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.
Sports is important for us.my favorite sport is basketball.
It not only make me happy,but also I can get a strong body.I do sports every day,you konw ,the more exercis I do,the halthier I will be I feel excited when I do exercise ,because of that,I become stronger than before .In a word.Do sports is a good way to get better grade.
Better body .Better life do more exercises so that we can learn better.
That's all .Thank you.

帮我看看英语作文有没有那里错了~谢谢了哥哥姐姐Dear friendsI'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.Sports is important for us.my favorite sport is basketball.It not only make me happy,but also I c
第一行Doing sports
第二行的my应该为My,
第三行为It not only can make me happy,but also can give me a strong body.
第四行you应为You.应在will be 后加“.”
第五行应为Doing.get better a grade ,a better body ,a better life.
第六行exerise不加“s” ,so前加“,”.
Dear friends
I'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.
Doing ports is important for us.my favorite sport is basketball.
It not only can make me happy,but also can give me a strong body.I do sports every day.You konw ,the more exercis I do,the halthier I will be .I feel excited when I do exercise .Because of that,I become stronger than before .In a word ,Doing sports is a good way to get a better grade ,a better body ,a better life.So please do more exercise ,so that we can learn better.
That's all .
Thank you for listening.
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Dear friends
I'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.
Sports is important for us. My favorite sport is basketball.
It not only make me happy,bu...

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Dear friends
I'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.
Sports is important for us. My favorite sport is basketball.
It not only make me happy,but also I can get a strong body. I do sports every day, you konw ,the more exercise I do, the healthier I will be .I feel excited when I do exercise ,because of that, I become stronger than before . In a word, doing sports is a good way to get better grades.
Better body ,better life .Do more exercises so that we can learn better.
That's all . Thank you.
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It not only make me happy,but also I can get a strong body....这句话有点小问题...你上几年级啊？