帮我看下下面的这段英文有没有错误Those failures in computer mainframes and datas as well as upgrading or transferringmanufacturing system datas are all will result in the discontinual operation ofenterprises’ core businesses.Which pu

帮我看下下面的这段英文有没有错误Those failures in computer mainframes and datas as well as upgrading or transferringmanufacturing system datas are all will result in the discontinual operation ofenterprises’ core businesses.Which pu
帮我看下下面的这段英文有没有错误
Those failures in computer mainframes and datas as well as upgrading or transferring
manufacturing system datas are all will result in the discontinual operation of
enterprises’ core businesses.Which put enterprises into big trouble,includes
the loses of earnings and customers and long-term effect on enterprises’reputation.
Customers must take sovereign remedy so as to achieve the high availability of
system.
Previous high availability solution are all selected the shared-disk
arrays as the facility to save core business datas,for example,Oracle database’s high availability solution which the background business database
system adopted (high availability solution in standby mode are discussed here and applications based on
Oracle load balancing technique are not included) will put the Oracle database
into shared-disk arrays to ensure the persistent and integrity
of businesses and datas.However,the weakness of this solution is that there
are no protection schemes offered to these core business datas and there is
something wrong with shared-disk arrays,system may not provide high
availability security in
short time.
Rose provides two-node high availability method which based
on pure soft copy technology,Rose can copy the
core business datas to standby units in real time and achieve the redundancy
backup,thus,avoid the disastrous consequences which may result from the
missing of core business datas.Rose also offer careful monitoring mechanism to
ensure high availability of entire application system solution.No matter where
the fault is,hosts,datas or in the process of transferring datas and upgrading
systems,it can also ensure the high availability of businesses and dataseffectively.

帮我看下下面的这段英文有没有错误Those failures in computer mainframes and datas as well as upgrading or transferringmanufacturing system datas are all will result in the discontinual operation ofenterprises’ core businesses.Which pu
太长了,眼花了,第一段中,第二行去掉are;第三行,which改为what.后面includes前加个it.下一行loses改为losses

这些故障的电脑主机和景致，以及升级或转移
制造系统景致都将导致在间断性操作的
企业的核心业务。把企业陷入大麻烦，包括
失去的盈利和客户的长期影响enterprises'reputation。
客户必须主权的补救措施，以实现高可用性
系统。
前高可用性解决方案都选择了共享磁盘
阵列的设施，以节省核心业务的景致，例如，Oracle数据库的高可用性...

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这些故障的电脑主机和景致，以及升级或转移
制造系统景致都将导致在间断性操作的
企业的核心业务。把企业陷入大麻烦，包括
失去的盈利和客户的长期影响enterprises'reputation。
客户必须主权的补救措施，以实现高可用性
系统。
前高可用性解决方案都选择了共享磁盘
阵列的设施，以节省核心业务的景致，例如，Oracle数据库的高可用性解决方案，后台业务数据库
系统通过（在待机模式下的高可用性解决方案在这里讨论和应用的基础上
Oracle负载均衡技术的不包括在内）将Oracle数据库
共享磁盘阵列，以确保持久性和完整性
企业和景致。然而，这种解决方案的弱点是，有
没有保护方案提供给这些核心业务景致和有
与共享磁盘阵列发生问题，系统可能无法提供高
情况安全
很短的时间。
罗斯提供了两个节点的高可用性方法，该方法基于
纯软拷贝技术，罗斯可以复制
核心业务数据，建立实时的待机单位和实现冗余
备份，从而避免可能导致灾难性的后果，
缺少核心业务的景致。，罗斯还提供仔细的监察机制，
确保整个应用系统的高可用性解决方案。无论身在处
故障，主机，景致或传输景致和升级的过程中，
系统，它也能确保高可用性的企业和dataseffectively。
我把它大意写出来了，但是专业名词不懂，你自己看吧！

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