帮我看看这篇文章,是我自己写的,有什么不对的,请改正,谢啦.This year's winter is very different,because this year's winter so beautiful.From January the 18th,snow began to fall.Go where,we can see everything is putting on a coat.
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帮我看看这篇文章,是我自己写的,有什么不对的,请改正,谢啦.This year's winter is very different,because this year's winter so beautiful.From January the 18th,snow began to fall.Go where,we can see everything is putting on a coat.
帮我看看这篇文章,是我自己写的,有什么不对的,请改正,谢啦.
This year's winter is very different,because this year's winter so beautiful.From January the 18th,snow began to fall.Go where,we can see everything is putting on a coat.What colour is it?Of course is white!Open the window,looking at changxing,feel that everything is so beautiful.
每一处有错误的地方请指出来,并且讲清楚原因,而且要改正,
帮我看看这篇文章,是我自己写的,有什么不对的,请改正,谢啦.This year's winter is very different,because this year's winter so beautiful.From January the 18th,snow began to fall.Go where,we can see everything is putting on a coat.
1.this year's winter 不准确,汉语式.说成this year就可以了,或者 winter of this year／ 2.第二个this year就用it代替.／ 3.From January the 18th,从11月18号开始,这是一个时间段,不能用短暂动词began,可以说it has begun to snow.from表时间的话要接to,所以换成 since／ 4.go where 是动词短语不能做状语,改成wherever we go.／ 5.put on 表示穿衣服的动作而不是状态,加了is 翻译过来是正在穿,所以换成wearing／ 6.of course is white这句话没有主语,is前加it／ 7.open the window 是动词短语不能做状语.应改为opening the window.／8.open 和 look是连续的动作,所以去掉逗号加并列连词and／ 9.changxing如果是地名,要大写C.／ 10.feel 是谓语动词,主语却没有,前面加I 或we can或you can.