谁能帮我改一下英语作文,急!句酷网说我有两个动词错误,四个句子错误,但是找不出来,求帮助. It's common that a growing number of people prefer travelling to staying at home.Meanwhile,environment problems have become th

谁能帮我改一下英语作文,急!句酷网说我有两个动词错误,四个句子错误,但是找不出来,求帮助. It's common that a growing number of people prefer travelling to staying at home.Meanwhile,environment problems have become th
谁能帮我改一下英语作文,急!
句酷网说我有两个动词错误,四个句子错误,但是找不出来,求帮助.
It's common that a growing number of people prefer travelling to staying at home.Meanwhile,environment problems have become the focus of the society.But who ought to be in charge of the problem after all.
Some people insist that the companies and the operators should pay the bills for it.They give their personal reason.While people walking in the tourism attractions,they always throw garbage at random which is obvious that they don't realize the importance of protecting the environment.So,if the companies and the visitor should pay for their behavior,it may make them pay more attention to environment health.As a result,the government can spend less money in bringing the pollution under control.
As the saying goes,Each coin has two sides.Part of people hold the opposite view that the government should assume the liabilities.Owing to their carelessness,the bulk of the plants haven't set up a perfect system of pollution discharge.
I can't agree those opinions totally.From my point of view,whether tour operators or government should bear the environmental responsibility.Because I have seen some person spitting anywhere frequently.The government haven't invest enough human resources and money on it equally.
Therefore,there is no use relying on independent power merely,everybody must devote themselves to protecting the environment.

谁能帮我改一下英语作文,急!句酷网说我有两个动词错误,四个句子错误,但是找不出来,求帮助. It's common that a growing number of people prefer travelling to staying at home.Meanwhile,environment problems have become th
While people walking in the tourism attractions——While people are walking in the tourism attractions or While walking in the tourism attractions.
,they always throw garbage at random which is obvious that they don't realize the importance of protecting the environment——,they always throw garbage at random and it is obvious that they don't realize the importance of protecting the environment.
Each coin has two sides——each coin has two sides.
the bulk of the plants haven't set up a perfect system of pollution discharge 把其中的haven't改成hasn't.
The government haven't invest enough human resources and money on it equally.也是吧haven't改成hasn't

From my point of view,whether tour operators or government should bear the environmental responsibility这句话不完整，没有谓语。.The government haven't invest enough human resources and money on it equally。invest in 的搭配，和on搭配不常见。说有四个句子错误 我看了半天，也没找出来。。