英文求职信文法修改!Dear Sir/Madam:I have learned from the website that there is TheXXX,and I wish to apply for the position.I have already graduated from XXX this year.I major Public administration and Policy.I had knowledge that how the com

英文求职信文法修改!Dear Sir/Madam:I have learned from the website that there is TheXXX,and I wish to apply for the position.I have already graduated from XXX this year.I major Public administration and Policy.I had knowledge that how the com
英文求职信文法修改!
Dear Sir/Madam:
I have learned from the website that there is TheXXX,and I wish to apply for the position.
I have already graduated from XXX this year.I major Public administration and Policy.I had knowledge that how the company bulid relation with government and citizen.I also leaned about business manage,including human resource,management and maket research.Moreover,I interest that so much.
After school,I work for Office of Students Affairs of university.My major post include to handle routine paper work,assist supervisor on event organization and entertaining foreign guests.I leaning communicate skill and I konwing what the best of working attitude.In addition,I also work for cafe to leaning manage daily operation and group mentality.I would appreciate to learn and with responsibility as well.
Thank you for sparing a time to read,I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
Sincerely yours,

英文求职信文法修改!Dear Sir/Madam:I have learned from the website that there is TheXXX,and I wish to apply for the position.I have already graduated from XXX this year.I major Public administration and Policy.I had knowledge that how the com
Dear Sir/Madam:
I have learned from the website that there is TheXXX, and I wish to apply for the position.
I have already graduated from XXX this year, and I majored in Public administration and Policy. I have the knowledge of how companies bulid relations with government and citizens. I also learned about business management, including human resource, management and maket research. Moreover, I am truly interested in these fields.
After school, I worked for Office of Students Affairs of university. My major post included handling routine paper work, assisting supervisors on event organizations and entertaining foreign guests. I learned communication skills and now I know what the best work attitude can be. In addition, I also worked in the café to learn how to manage daily operation and group mentality. I appreciate the opportunity to learn these and I did my job with responsibility as well.
Thank you for sparing your precious time to read this letter, and I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
Sincerely yours,
你好,首先是注意每个逗号后面都要空一格.其次注意拼写.我改了一些语法错误,有些地方还是有明显的不通顺或者awkward sentence.
如果有不懂的可以追问,祝工作顺利.

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Dear Sir/Madam:
I would like to apply for the position XXX which is currently advertised on the website xxxx.
I have got BA(or MA) Public administration and Policy from xxxx thi...

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Dear Sir/Madam:
I would like to apply for the position XXX which is currently advertised on the website xxxx.
I have got BA(or MA) Public administration and Policy from xxxx this year. I have knowledge of how a company should build relations with the government and citizens. I have also studied business management, including Human Resource, Marketing Management and Research, which I am very interested in.
I also have some part-time work experience of the Office of Students Affairs of the university(?).My main duty includes handling routine paper work, assisting supervisor with event organization and entertaining foreign guests(?). I have improved my communication skill and I konwing what the best of working attitude(?). In addition,I also work for a cafe to learn how to manage daily operation and group mentality. I am a responsible person with an eagerness to learn.
Thank you for your time to consider my application. I am looking forward to an interview and an opportunity to speak to you.
Sincerely yours,

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Dear Sir/Madam:
I have learned from the website that there is The XXX, and I wish to apply for the position.
I have already graduated from XXX this year, majoring in Public Administration and ...

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Dear Sir/Madam:
I have learned from the website that there is The XXX, and I wish to apply for the position.
I have already graduated from XXX this year, majoring in Public Administration and Policy. I have knowledge of how companies build relations with the government and citizens. I also learned about how businesses manage and operate, including human resources management and market research. Moreover, I am very interested in that area.
After school, I worked for the Office of Student Affairs at my university. My major post included handling routine paper work, assisting supervisors on event organization and entertaining foreign guests. I learned about communication skills and I also know what the best attitude to work is. In addition, I also worked at a cafe to learn how to manage daily operations and gain more knowledge about group mentality. I appreciated the opportunity to learn all this and hold up more responsibilities as well.
Thank you for sparing some time to read this letter. I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
Sincerely yours,
楼主你好，这是我一手改的，希望能对你有帮助！
有问题可以追问哦！谢谢楼主！
祝学习进步！！

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