帮我批改下作文,按高考批卷.总分30分.是2007年四川作文.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信,询Dear Henry：I'm glad to receive your letter.About your question ,I have already make a plan for the summer vacation.Af
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帮我批改下作文,按高考批卷.总分30分.是2007年四川作文.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信,询Dear Henry：I'm glad to receive your letter.About your question ,I have already make a plan for the summer vacation.Af
帮我批改下作文,按高考批卷.总分30分.是2007年四川作文.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信,询
Dear Henry：
I'm glad to receive your letter.About your question ,I have already make a plan for the summer vacation.After the college extrance examination,there is a three-month-holiday.I want have a sensible vacation.The most inportant thing is I should spend more time on my parent.I must have a long time to relax and do exerse.For my feature,I must extend my sight.So it's necessary for me to read more books in spare time.I will join in the social activites.It's a good opportunity for me to learn some social experience.
How do you think about my plan?It's good enough?Please give me some suggestions.I expect for you letter and tell me about your ideas.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
帮我批改下作文,按高考批卷.总分30分.是2007年四川作文.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信,询Dear Henry：I'm glad to receive your letter.About your question ,I have already make a plan for the summer vacation.Af
Make-----made 扣三分
Want------want to 扣三分
On----with 扣两分
You----your 扣一分
expect for___expect 扣两分.
整体扣3分（没有使用非谓语,定从）
那就16分了.
你是高一的吧,以后英语作文有困难加我吧.494510134