这篇英语短文帮忙看看都错哪了中文及英文从语法错误请帮助指出来.亲爱的 XX我的名字叫做XXX.我来自中国吉林省吉林市,中国的北方城市.即将寄宿在你家,得知被安排在你家我十分高兴.我14

这篇英语短文帮忙看看都错哪了中文及英文从语法错误请帮助指出来.亲爱的 XX我的名字叫做XXX.我来自中国吉林省吉林市,中国的北方城市.即将寄宿在你家,得知被安排在你家我十分高兴.我14
这篇英语短文帮忙看看都错哪了
中文及英文从语法错误请帮助指出来.
亲爱的 XX
我的名字叫做XXX.我来自中国吉林省吉林市,中国的北方城市.即将寄宿在你家,得知被安排在你家我十分高兴.
我14岁了,1999年出生.我的英文不好,所以,可能会有些麻烦.
我的英文名叫做TOM,所以 你们可以叫我TOM.我喜欢运动和看书.比如游泳,玩球类运动.
我将在8月12日到8月25日住在您家里.
这是我第一次走出国门.你有什么一些我该知道的建议,或提前准备?
DearXX
My name is XXX.I come fromJiLincity andjilinprovincial of china.China's northern
cities.Soon lodge in your
family.That was placed in your home life,I am very pleased.
I am 14 years old.I was born1999.My English is not good .So,maybe have some troubles.
My English name is Tom,So you can call me Tom.I like sports and watch
book.Such as swim,play the ball games.
I will be August 12 toAugust 25 living in your home
This is my first time to go abroad.would you have somem suggestions fou me
on anying fou me onanying that I should know or be prepared for.
YourXX

这篇英语短文帮忙看看都错哪了中文及英文从语法错误请帮助指出来.亲爱的 XX我的名字叫做XXX.我来自中国吉林省吉林市,中国的北方城市.即将寄宿在你家,得知被安排在你家我十分高兴.我14
My name is XXX,I come from jilin city of jilin province ,which is a city in the north of China.I will be boarding in your house.And being informed of living in your house,i I am very pleased.
I'm 14 years old,born in 1999.as my English is not good,so there might be some trouble.
My English name is TOM,so you can call me TOM.I like sports and reading.Such as swimming,playing ball games.
I will be living in your home from 12 August to 25 August .
This is my first time abroad.
I wonder if you have some advice,or preparations in advance.
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文章错误很多，一些固定搭配不会用，太生硬。没有什么亮点，不会用一些常用的句式。应多用些倒装，强调，从句等增拿加文采。你这读书用watch book ?应该用read book 这就看出你基础知识不牢固。加油吧！

我来自中国吉林省吉林市，中国的北方城市。
I come from Jilin city, Jilin province, a northern city of China.

即将寄宿在你家，得知被安排在你家我十分高兴。
The fact that I will soon lodge in your family makes me very h...

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我来自中国吉林省吉林市，中国的北方城市。
I come from Jilin city, Jilin province, a northern city of China.

即将寄宿在你家，得知被安排在你家我十分高兴。
The fact that I will soon lodge in your family makes me very happy.

我14岁了，1999年出生。我的英文不好，所以，可能会有些麻烦。
Born in 1999, I'm 14 years old now. My English is not good, so there might be some trouble.

我喜欢看书
I like reading books

比如游泳，玩球类运动
Such as swiming and some ball games.
我将在8月12日到8月25日住在您家里。
I will be living in your house from August 12th to August 25th .
你有什么一些我该知道的建议，或提前准备？
Would you give me some advice that I should know or prepare in advance？

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1. A city in northern China

2. I'll be lodging at your home shortly and I'm very pleased to be told that I was placed with you.

3. I may have some troubles 比 ma...

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   1. A city in northern China

   2. I'll be lodging at your home shortly and I'm very pleased to be told that I was placed with you.

   3. I may have some troubles 比 maybe have some troubles 好些

   4. Reading 不是 watching books

   5. such as swimming and playing ball games

   6. I'll be living at your home from 12th August until the 25th

   7. going abroad

   8. do you have suggestions for me?

   9. are there any beforehand preparations that i should take into consideration?
      

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   born 后加in，maybe前要加主语，book前应换成read