谁来帮我看看这篇英语作文对不对,错在哪里I have a good friend.Her name is Li Lin.She is a chinese girl.She is thirday years old.She is tall and slim.And she has short hair.She aiso has two big eyes and a small mouth.Everyone like her

谁来帮我看看这篇英语作文对不对,错在哪里I have a good friend.Her name is Li Lin.She is a chinese girl.She is thirday years old.She is tall and slim.And she has short hair.She aiso has two big eyes and a small mouth.Everyone like her
谁来帮我看看这篇英语作文对不对,错在哪里
I have a good friend.Her name is Li Lin.She is a chinese girl.
She is thirday years old.She is tall and slim.And she has short hair.She aiso has two big eyes and a small mouth.Everyone like her very much.She is studies at No.10 Middle School.She is in Class 2,Grade 7.She is good at Maths and running,too.She is my hero.Because I am not good at Maths and running.Her hobbise are swimming and playing tennis.She likes Spring Festival.Because we can piay and it is fun.

谁来帮我看看这篇英语作文对不对,错在哪里I have a good friend.Her name is Li Lin.She is a chinese girl.She is thirday years old.She is tall and slim.And she has short hair.She aiso has two big eyes and a small mouth.Everyone like her
She is studies at No.10 Middle School--is studying /studies
hero--heroine
Because I am--it is because that...
it is fun--have a fun(没有错,这样更好)
重复的我就不说了

1、“She is thirday years old”这里错了“She is thirteen years old”吧。
翻译她是十三岁
2.'Everyone like "------"'Everyone likes "
3、“Her hobbise”------“Her hobbies”

She is thirday years old。错了，三十岁应该是thirty。你说是七年级2班的应该是thirteen，十三岁。She aiso has two big eyes and a small mouth.是also。Everyone like her very much.everyone是三单所以是likes。She is studies at No.10 Middle Scho...

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She is thirday years old。错了，三十岁应该是thirty。你说是七年级2班的应该是thirteen，十三岁。She aiso has two big eyes and a small mouth.是also。Everyone like her very much.everyone是三单所以是likes。She is studies at No.10 Middle School。be动词后ing形式she is studing。She is good at Maths and running,too.这里math不能加s，也不用too。后面同理。Her hobbise are swimming and playing tennis。hobbies。

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