大家帮我看看怎么写才能更好,句子能不能再完美一些,动词短语能不能再替换的独特一些?2014中考英语作文热点话题：低碳生活 现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即：降低二氧
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大家帮我看看怎么写才能更好,句子能不能再完美一些,动词短语能不能再替换的独特一些?2014中考英语作文热点话题：低碳生活 现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即：降低二氧
大家帮我看看怎么写才能更好,句子能不能再完美一些,动词短语能不能再替换的独特一些?
2014中考英语作文热点话题：低碳生活 现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即：降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式.低碳生活对我们大家都有好处,请你写一篇短文关于倡导低碳生活的建议.内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议.
提示词语：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse
我的作文：
More and more people come torealize how important it is to save resources.The reason why we carry out the low-carbonlife is that we can try out utmost to protect the environment.
Firstly,we can ride a bikeinstead of drivering car.Secondly,We should eat up our food in plate aftera meal.Moreover,Why not do more helpful sports?What’s more?We should be able to save paperas possible.
All in all.Nothing could be moreshameful than waste.It is universally acknowledged that carrying out the low-carbonlife has become a trend.Let’s make some contribution for our earth!
大家帮我看看怎么写才能更好,句子能不能再完美一些,动词短语能不能再替换的独特一些?2014中考英语作文热点话题：低碳生活 现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即：降低二氧
can try out utmost to protect the environment.改成need to protect...或者can去除,变成try our best to protect.
firstly是没有的,就是first
aftera meal.吃完饭吃干净有什么用,应该是吃饭的时候,when we are having meals
Moreover改成thirdly,和first secondly thirdly 对应
We should be able to save paperas possible. be able to去除,be able to意思是有能力做某事,放在这边不通顺
all in all,用逗号,不要重新开一句,类似in one word这样.
contribution用复数
carry out是执行的意思,用suggest表示倡导低碳生活更好
望采纳,看了很久