求高人指导批改英语作文.Difficulties in learning English \x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05 \x05\x05 As we all know,English is more and more popular in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy while studyi

求高人指导批改英语作文.Difficulties in learning English \x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05 \x05\x05 As we all know,English is more and more popular in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy while studyi
求高人指导批改英语作文.
Difficulties in learning English \x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05 \x05\x05
As we all know,English is more and more popular in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy while studying.
I have studied English for more than ten years,what's the biggest problem in my study is listening,just because I rarely have the opportunities to listen to the traditional English.In the past few years,we always write and write,so it resulted in my poor English listening.What's more,I have difficulty in speaking English,the reason is that we usually talk in English with our classmates and teachers who could understand us even though we couldn't speak fluently.However,foreigners may not understand the English we speak.But now,I think I have found some useful ways to solve these difficulties,and my teacher and classmates can help me with my English.
In a word,I hope I could overcome these difficulties in my four-year university life,and I could have great progress in other ways about English.

求高人指导批改英语作文.Difficulties in learning English \x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05\x05 \x05\x05 As we all know,English is more and more popular in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy while studyi
Difficulties in learning English
　　As we all know,English is more and more 【popular】 in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy 【while studying】.
　　I have studied English for more than ten years,【what's】 the biggest problem in my study is listening,【just】 because I rarely have the opportunities to listen to the 【traditional】 English.In the past 【few years】,we 【always write and write】,so it 【】resulted in my poor English listening.What's more,I have difficulty in speaking English,the reason【】 is that we usually talk in English with our classmates and teachers who could understand us even though we couldn't 【speak fluently】.However,foreigners may not understand the English we speak【】.But now,I think I have found some 【useful】 ways to solve these 【difficulties】,and my teacher and classmates can help me with my English.
　　In a word,I hope I could overcome these difficulties 【in】 my four-year university 【life】,and I 【could】 【have】 great progress in 【other ways about】 English.
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　　Difficulties in learning English
　　As we all know,English is more and more common used in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy to study actually.
　　I have studied English for more than ten years,there are still some difficulties.The biggest problem in my study is listening,that's because I rarely have the opportunities to listen to the idiomatic English.In the past,we always value the skill of writing and ignore other abilities,so it has resulted in my poor English listening.What's more,I have difficulty in speaking English,the reason why is that we usually talk in English with our classmates and teachers who can still understand us even though we couldn't make it clear.However,foreigners may not understand the English we speak as it may a little bit “Chingish”.But now,I think I have found some effective ways to solve these problems,and my teacher and classmates can also help me with my English.
　　In a word,I hope I could overcome these difficulties during my four-year university school life,and I am sure that I will make great progress in English.
祝好!
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As we all know, English is *becoming* more and more popular in our life, and *nowadays* most of us are learning English. But English is not easy *to study*.
I have studied English for more tha...

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As we all know, English is *becoming* more and more popular in our life, and *nowadays* most of us are learning English. But English is not easy *to study*.
I have studied English for more than ten years. The biggest problem (obstacle) for me is listening, just because I rarely have the *opportunity* to listen to *authentic English (native English speakers)*. *During* the past few years, *my education has over-emphasized on writing*, and this resulted in my poor English listening. What's more, I have difficulty in English speaking (speaking English). The reason is that we usually talk in English with our *teachers and classmates* who (could) understand us even though we don't (couldn't) speak fluent or grammatically correct English. However, foreigners may have trouble understanding (may not understand) the English we speak. *However*, now I think I have found some "useful solutions to" these difficulties, and my teachers and classmates can help me "improve my English".
In *conclusion*, I hope I could overcome *my difficulties in listening and speaking* during my four years of university life, and that I coud *make great progress in other English-related areas as well*.
**代表改正的地方，（）代表可以用另种说法。有些地方我换了单词，提升你作文表达的深度。比如说in vs. during, 只要是提到时间你大可用during。还有尽量不要用But开头写句子，用However。请供参考。

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difficulties in learning English这个题目是自己想的还是给的命题啊？个人觉得改成Problems比较好
第一句可以把and换成besides,可以起个强调的作用。然后是English is not easy to study，应该是英语难学，而不是学的时候才困难。第二段把what's去掉。the biggest problem ...
把because...

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difficulties in learning English这个题目是自己想的还是给的命题啊？个人觉得改成Problems比较好
第一句可以把and换成besides,可以起个强调的作用。然后是English is not easy to study，应该是英语难学，而不是学的时候才困难。第二段把what's去掉。the biggest problem ...
把because 前的just换成mainly比较好，have opportunities,去掉the。
listen the traditional English去掉to，而且traditional English是什么，你是想说听的少？还是说听地道的英语少？而且上问提到的听力是你的最大问题，我觉得不如就放一个listen在这里就行了。
然后是we always write and write,这里应该只有你自己，而且时态不对，而且always write应该不会是造成听力不好的结果，写的多，听的少还是怎么的。
后面的what's more,这个感觉不太好，首先已经说了最大的问题是听，这个what's more，那最大的问题到底是说还是听，我觉得这里应该表达成由于听的少，同样也造成了说的问题。
后面的talk English with. the English we spoken。
暂时想到的就这么多。

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