英语改错.When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main pr...英语改错.When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tred to t

英语改错.When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main pr...英语改错.When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tred to t
英语改错.When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main pr...
英语改错.When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tred to translate everything into Chinese.My teacher advised me to keep diaries.I followed her advice.Happily it worked.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher.She liked it very much that she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was the good one.I was great encouraged by their words.

英语改错.When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main pr...英语改错.When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tred to t
I ran into many difficulties.
The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese.
My teacher advised me to keep writing diaries.
I adopted her advice.
Happily it worked.
Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.
One day I wrote a short story and showed it to my teacher.
She liked it very much and she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was good .
I was great encouraged by their words.

1.The main problem was in (去掉in）
2.Soon I began to enjoy talk （talk改为talking动名词）
3.to express me in simple （me改为myself）
4.showed it my teacher（my前加to）
5.She liked it very much that （ve...

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1.The main problem was in (去掉in）
2.Soon I began to enjoy talk （talk改为talking动名词）
3.to express me in simple （me改为myself）
4.showed it my teacher（my前加to）
5.She liked it very much that （very much改为so much+that）
6.I was great encouraged （great改为greatly）
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run改为ran,
in that I always thought 中in去掉，
enjoy talk改为enjoy talking,
express me 改为express myself,
show it to my teacher,加to,
very much that she read 改为，very much so that,
great 应改换成一个副词形式。