求高人来帮我修改下这篇英文诗!Your SmileYour smile is sweetLikes the meadow greet to meYour smile is beautyLikes the rose comes into blossomYour smile is gentleLikes the willow kisses my faceYour smile is warmLikes the sun shinesI only h
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求高人来帮我修改下这篇英文诗!Your SmileYour smile is sweetLikes the meadow greet to meYour smile is beautyLikes the rose comes into blossomYour smile is gentleLikes the willow kisses my faceYour smile is warmLikes the sun shinesI only h
求高人来帮我修改下这篇英文诗!
Your Smile
Your smile is sweet
Likes the meadow greet to me
Your smile is beauty
Likes the rose comes into blossom
Your smile is gentle
Likes the willow kisses my face
Your smile is warm
Likes the sun shines
I only have four scores now .If I got above five scores next time ,I will give it to you .Thank you very much
求高人来帮我修改下这篇英文诗!Your SmileYour smile is sweetLikes the meadow greet to meYour smile is beautyLikes the rose comes into blossomYour smile is gentleLikes the willow kisses my faceYour smile is warmLikes the sun shinesI only h
Your smile is sweet
Like the meadow greeting me
Your smile is beautiful
Like the rose coming into blossom
Your smile is gentle
Like the willow kissing my face
Your smile is warm
Like the sun shining through space
In order to make your poem more clearly and coherently, You should replace the word [likes] with word [as], however, I suggest you not to use it consecutively.
Your smile
so sweet
as the m...
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In order to make your poem more clearly and coherently, You should replace the word [likes] with word [as], however, I suggest you not to use it consecutively.
Your smile
so sweet
as the meadow greets me
Your smile
so loveliness
as the rose comes into blossom
Your smile
so gentle
as the willow kisses my face
Your smile
so warm
as the sun shines brightly
*[Prize point or point] instead of [score]
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