英语短文,希望懂语法的帮忙修改一下My FavouritesEveryone likes people and things,such as singers,sportsmen,music,films and cartoon characters.So before we finish school,I will talk about my favourites.On music,four my favourite singers

英语短文,希望懂语法的帮忙修改一下My FavouritesEveryone likes people and things,such as singers,sportsmen,music,films and cartoon characters.So before we finish school,I will talk about my favourites.On music,four my favourite singers
英语短文,希望懂语法的帮忙修改一下
My Favourites
Everyone likes people and things,such as singers,sportsmen,music,films and cartoon characters.So before we finish school,I will talk about my favourites.
On music,four my favourite singers are Jay Chou,Wayne Lin,Leehom Wang and Will Pan.They at the top of China pop music.They are all excellent,but they each have different style.And Qinghuaci is the top of China style music.
On sports,my favourite table tennis player is Ma Lin.He was first after he beat Wang Hao at Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.I like him because he plays wonderful.Table tennis,badminton and basketball are also my favourite sports.
On cartoon,many friends know my favourite cartoon character is Shinichi Kudo,his another name is Conan,he is a detective and he is clever.He finds out many different things.
Ok,we have only two months to prepare the test.So believe ourselves and we will win.
不是翻译，是错误的语法改正一下……

英语短文,希望懂语法的帮忙修改一下My FavouritesEveryone likes people and things,such as singers,sportsmen,music,films and cartoon characters.So before we finish school,I will talk about my favourites.On music,four my favourite singers
My Favourites
Eeryone have their own favourites.Such as singers, sportsmen, music, films and cartoon characters.
For my favourite singers On music are Jay Chou, Wayne Lin, Leehom Wang and Will Pan.Because they are all excellent and can stand at the top of China pop music.What is more ,they all present different styles of pop music.And Qinghuaci is the best of China style music.
My favourite sportsman on table tennis is Ma Lin.He became first after he defeated Wang Hao at Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. I like him because he plays wonderful. Badminton and basketball are also my favourite sports.
Many friends know my favourite cartoon character is Shinichi Kudo.He is a clever detective and also called Conan.He can find out many mysterious things.
最后一段貌似可以省掉吧,那个和前文的关系不是很大的感觉.句子语法还不错啦,如果能多转换一点句型就会增色很多,结构也会更紧凑的.加油～～!

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每个人都喜欢的人和事物，如歌手，运动员，音乐，电影和卡通人物。因此，在我们完成学业，我会谈谈我的收藏。
音乐，四是我最喜欢的歌手周杰伦，韦恩林， Leehom Wang和潘玮柏。他们上方的中国流行音乐。他们都是优秀的，但他们都有不同的风格。和Qinghuaci是我国上方的风格的音乐。
论体育，我最喜欢的乒乓球选手是马琳。他是第一次，他战胜汪灏在北京2008年奥...

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我的收藏
每个人都喜欢的人和事物，如歌手，运动员，音乐，电影和卡通人物。因此，在我们完成学业，我会谈谈我的收藏。
音乐，四是我最喜欢的歌手周杰伦，韦恩林， Leehom Wang和潘玮柏。他们上方的中国流行音乐。他们都是优秀的，但他们都有不同的风格。和Qinghuaci是我国上方的风格的音乐。
论体育，我最喜欢的乒乓球选手是马琳。他是第一次，他战胜汪灏在北京2008年奥运会。我喜欢他，因为他发挥太好了。乒乓球，羽毛球和篮球也是我最喜欢的体育运动。
关于漫画，许多朋友知道我最喜欢的卡通人物是工藤新一，他的另一个名字是柯南，他是一个侦探，他是聪明的。他发现了许多不同的事情。
好吧，我们只有两个月的时间来准备考试。因此，相信自己，我们将赢得胜利。

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such as singers 改成 singer。 sportsmen尽量用athlete .