求雅思大作文范文参考Leisure is a growing industry ,but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative.Do you agree or disagree?如果是 When it comes to the le
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求雅思大作文范文参考Leisure is a growing industry ,but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative.Do you agree or disagree?如果是 When it comes to the le
求雅思大作文范文参考
Leisure is a growing industry ,but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative.Do you agree or disagree?
如果是 When it comes to the leisure being a growing industry ,some people think it is not as interesting as the games they did when they are very young .…………那篇就算了,我已经看见了,根本不是4段式,不符合标准,参考价值不高.
给出每段思路,相关词汇,短语也是可以的……目前没思路………………
求雅思大作文范文参考Leisure is a growing industry ,but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative.Do you agree or disagree?如果是 When it comes to the le
那题目的观点你是同意还是不同意先?我个人来讲是不同意的,现在娱乐比以前多了,只是方式不一样而已.
第一段,摆观点,不同意
第二段,不同意的原因123（娱乐只是为了放松,与creative无关,随着科技的发展,娱乐变得多样化,简单化和生活化,摆点实例支持观点,像online game,online chat,online reading,当然也有很多户外活动）
第三段,让步讨论对方观点,诚然科技发展也有其弊端,网络的发达使人宁可花更多时间在电脑面前而不是出去社交（科技发达的弊端有很多事例的,沉迷游戏不利于身心发展等等）
第四段,再次表达自己的观点是不同意的,虽然有弊端,但是当今人们娱乐的选择比以前多多了,大家有更多的选择适合自己的方式去娱乐,而市场的需求反而让新的娱乐more creative,所以说less creative 是不成立的.
第五段,总结