麻烦看下下面的句子有没有语法问题?可以的话最好能给出解决办法,有劳您费神,本人英语很烂,让您见笑了...呵呵1.it gives us a strong responsibility to do it best!2.let us can’t stand waiting to see his next sho

麻烦看下下面的句子有没有语法问题?可以的话最好能给出解决办法,有劳您费神,本人英语很烂,让您见笑了...呵呵1.it gives us a strong responsibility to do it best!2.let us can’t stand waiting to see his next sho
麻烦看下下面的句子有没有语法问题?
可以的话最好能给出解决办法,有劳您费神,
本人英语很烂,让您见笑了...呵呵
1.it gives us a strong responsibility to do it best!
2.let us can’t stand waiting to see his next show…
3.we also could search and download much useful information on the Internet and print them on a small book send those books to everyone who was interested in this special exhibition.“★”
4.This is exactly the goal we need to do our best to achieve!
5.We could make a professional Web side in our school’s home page use it to introduce this EXPO and renew them everyday
6.But on the other hand ,I didn’t hope that opening ceremony will come so quickly ,to give us some another spare time to learn more
knowledge better serve everyone attend this special party.
这句后半句可以这样写吗?
7.Just this interesting thing opened the gate of modern media
development.
8.make our “voice” to be remembered by our children and
grandchildren…
9...let us can’t stand waiting to see his next show…
10.let every visitors know the latest news about our EXPO in the day of it opening.

麻烦看下下面的句子有没有语法问题?可以的话最好能给出解决办法,有劳您费神,本人英语很烂,让您见笑了...呵呵1.it gives us a strong responsibility to do it best!2.let us can’t stand waiting to see his next sho
1.很中国化的说法,你想表达这让我们有了强烈的责任感,决心把这件事做到最好吗?建议：
It makes us feel more responsible for this to do it followed the best standard!
2.把这句话跟上文断开,不要用let了,直接重新起句,建议：
We can't stand waiting for his next show.
3.整个句子有点乱,不过没语法错误,建议：
We can also search and download much useful information on the internet,print them into small books which can be sent to people who are interested in this special exhibition.
4.这正是我们需要尽力达到的目标,是这意思吗?句序有点乱,建议：
Exactly,it is the goal that we need try our best to achieve!用it is强调重要性
5.把主语webside强调出来.建议
A professional webside can be built in our school's homepage to introduce the EXPO and provide convinience for us to renew everday.
6.后面不通,建议：
But on the other hand,I didn't hope the opening ceremony comes so quickly.I need much more spare time in learning knowledge in order to give a better service for everyon who will attend this special party.
7.不能用“门”这类单词啦,你是想表达开启了现代传媒的发展之门吧,用door太直译了- -,建议：
Just this interesting thing lead the way of the development of mordern media.
8.用被动有点不好,主动形式可能还顺口些,把children and grandchildren改成generation to generation,世世代代
9.就是第二题
10.every后面用单数,在哪一天要用on,建议：
help every visitor know the latest news about our EXPO on the day of the opening.
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总的来说,其实语法错误倒不多,只是比较中式英语啦,说法不地道,不懂的HI我吧～

额，楼主把中文原句拿出来让我们做翻译吧。这个真的不好改。
主要是无法猜测原句的含义~~~

1.it gives us a strong responsibility to do it best!把前面的it改为which,和前面的句子组成一个非限定性定语从句
2.let us can’t stand waiting to see his next show…将let us 改为we,英语没有这样的表达
3.全句改为：we also could search and do...

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1.it gives us a strong responsibility to do it best!把前面的it改为which,和前面的句子组成一个非限定性定语从句
2.let us can’t stand waiting to see his next show…将let us 改为we,英语没有这样的表达
3.全句改为：we also could search and download much useful information on the Internet and print them on a small book，then send those books to people who are interested in the special exhibition.
5.We could make a professional Webside on our school’s homepage to introduce this EXPO, we also would renew it everyday
6.全局这样写： on the other hand ,I didn’t hope that the opening ceremony would come so quickly ,and I wish I would have much spare time to learn more knowledge which could serve everyone attending this special party better.
7.Just this interesting thing opened the gate of modern media
development. 这句话gate改为door
9 问题同上2
10 in the day of it opening. 改为 on the opening day

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1)把do it best改成do our best
2)let us改成We
3）在book后加上句号，然后then send....
4）正确
5）在page后面加逗号，在EXPO后加逗号，在句未加句号
6）把But去掉。i do hope that the opening... 把some another spare time中的another去掉。...

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1)把do it best改成do our best
2)let us改成We
3）在book后加上句号，然后then send....
4）正确
5）在page后面加逗号，在EXPO后加逗号，在句未加句号
6）把But去掉。i do hope that the opening... 把some another spare time中的another去掉。在knowledge后加上to
7）把just去掉
8）把voice后的to去掉
9）let us改成we
10）every visitor没有s，the day of it’s opening.!
我让我的美国姐姐确认了一下
希望对你有帮助！

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