Being questioned by overseas students and under the pressure of quality control,Singapore private schools have into a transitional stage.How to build brand by education quality?How to make effective strategies during this time?This is the challenge f

Being questioned by overseas students and under the pressure of quality control,Singapore private schools have into a transitional stage.How to build brand by education quality?How to make effective strategies during this time?This is the challenge f
Being questioned by overseas students and under the pressure of quality control,Singapore private schools have into a transitional stage.How to build brand by education quality?How to make effective strategies during this time?This is the challenge for private schools and ministry of education.

Being questioned by overseas students and under the pressure of quality control,Singapore private schools have into a transitional stage.How to build brand by education quality?How to make effective strategies during this time?This is the challenge f
Being questioned by students abroad
这里abroad是个adv比overseas的修饰作用好了很多,更专一些.
and under the pressure of education quality,
这可以直接说教学质量,原句太繁琐
Singapore private schools have came into a transitional stage.
这可以理解成进入转折阶段
How to build brand by improving education quality?
改善教学质量,by后面加个动词短语更合理些
How to make effective strategies during this period?
某一阶段,用这个period比用time好,time单独用表时间,而不是指某段时间
These are the challenges for private schools and ministry of education.
面临的挑战比较多,用复数
这就是我个人的见解,希望能起到参考作用,当然每个人有每个人的想法,都是值得参考的,

其实挺好的啊~
那我就提个小建议吧：Private schools in Singapore are en route to a transitional stage.
en route是从法语词过来的一个英语词组，表示在……的路上。
用了这个词，感觉更体现词汇量……呵呵……:P

pressure没拼错。
Singapore private school are THEREFORE moving into a transitional stage.星加坡私校因此。。。。。
this is the challenge for private schools and THE ministry of education.

【Due to questions from】 overseas students 【and the】 pressure of quality control, Singapore private schools have 【shifted】 into a transitional stage. How 【do they】 build 【their name through their】 educ...

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【Due to questions from】 overseas students 【and the】 pressure of quality control, Singapore private schools have 【shifted】 into a transitional stage. How 【do they】 build 【their name through their】 education quality? How 【can they think up】 effective strategies during this time? This is the challenge for 【both】 private schools and 【the】 ministry of education.
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undering the presure....
Private schools in Singapore are on the half way of transition.

根据你原句的含义（原句的含义基本清楚），我认为要改动的只是个别单词即可。下面括弧中的为需改动的词语，被改动的词语已删除。
Being questioned by overseas students and under the pressure of quality control, Singapore private schools (are approaching) a transiti...

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根据你原句的含义（原句的含义基本清楚），我认为要改动的只是个别单词即可。下面括弧中的为需改动的词语，被改动的词语已删除。
Being questioned by overseas students and under the pressure of quality control, Singapore private schools (are approaching) a transitional stage. How to (build up) brand by education quality and how to determine/set up effective strategies during this time? This is the challenge for private schools and ministry of education/The privite schools and the ministry of education are in face of the critical challenge.

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海外学生的压力下,新加坡的质量控制的私立学校已经变成一个过渡阶段。如何建立品牌所受的教育质量呢?如何制定有效的策略,在这段时间里吗?这是一场挑战,私立学校和教育部。