帮忙改改英语作文Talk about moviesMovies are important for many people in the world.But what kind of movie is the best?Now let’s talk about movies.And choose the best movie for you.I think the best movies are useful for people.First,comedies

帮忙改改英语作文Talk about moviesMovies are important for many people in the world.But what kind of movie is the best?Now let’s talk about movies.And choose the best movie for you.I think the best movies are useful for people.First,comedies
帮忙改改英语作文
Talk about movies
Movies are important for many people in the world.But what kind of movie is the best?Now let’s talk about movies.And choose the best movie for you.
I think the best movies are useful for people.First,comedies can only make people laugh.People might see them when they are nerves.The second,Beijing operas are interesting,but it only sing and dance.They are not very useful.The third,action movies are exciting,people see it when they are cachexia,and they are not useful,too.
So I like documentaries.They are best movies,I think.Many people think they are boring.But it can help us open our eyes.We can know many things from them.Some are talk about the news; some are talk about the animals,countries,cities and so on.We can often see the movies on CCTV10,or on the computers.Now,if you want to know about the other things,you can see the documentaries.And you often see this kind of movies,you will like them.

帮忙改改英语作文Talk about moviesMovies are important for many people in the world.But what kind of movie is the best?Now let’s talk about movies.And choose the best movie for you.I think the best movies are useful for people.First,comedies
1,But what kind of movie is the best?改为 But what kind of movies is the best?
2,People might see them when they are nerves.改为People might see them when they are nervous（此处应为形容词）
3,The second,The third去掉The
4,but it only sing and dance觉着不太对（but it only includes singing and dancing 比较好）
5,people see it when they are cachexia,and they are not useful,too.改为people see them when they have cachexia,and they are not useful,neither.（cachexia是名词哦）
6,They are best movies改为 They are the best movies（形容词最高级前必须加the）
7,But it can help us open our eyes.改为 But they can help us open our eyes.
8,Some are talk about the news.改为Some are talking about the news.下面的talk 也加ing
9,CCTV10改为CCTV-10
10,And you often see this kind of movies,you will like them.And后加个if比较好
另外,如果这是你自己写的话最好改一改连接词,逻辑不是太连贯：比如：So I like documentaries.好像没啥因果关系,去掉so比较好.当然你执意这样写老师也不会给你错.
其余的连词自己改改吧,

Talk about movies
Movies are important for many people in the world. But what kind of movies is the best? Now let’s talk about movies. And choose the best movies for you.
I think the best mov...

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Talk about movies
Movies are important for many people in the world. But what kind of movies is the best? Now let’s talk about movies. And choose the best movies for you.
I think the best movies are useful for people. First, comedies can only make people laugh. People might see them when they are nerves. The second, Beijing operas are interesting, but it only sings and dances. They are not very useful. The third, action movies are exciting, people see it when they are cachexia, and they are not useful, too.
So I like documentaries. They are best movies, I think. Many people think they are boring. But it can help us open our eyes. We can know many things from them. Some talks about the news; some talks about the animals, countries, cities and so on. We can often see the movies on CCTV10 or on the computers. Now, if you want to know about the other things, you can see the documentaries. if you often see this kind of movies, you will like them.

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