求英语大神帮我检查下这篇作文的语法.If one day I have a chance to be a color,Iwould like to be green.Maybe someone would ask,why green?That primarilybecause the green represent hope.When the chilly winter is gone,and springcomes back

求英语大神帮我检查下这篇作文的语法.If one day I have a chance to be a color,Iwould like to be green.Maybe someone would ask,why green?That primarilybecause the green represent hope.When the chilly winter is gone,and springcomes back
求英语大神帮我检查下这篇作文的语法.
If one day I have a chance to be a color,I
would like to be green.Maybe someone would ask,why green?That primarily
because the green represent hope.When the chilly winter is gone,and spring
comes back to awaken the life on earth,the tree on the hill were just leafing
out,the leaves were green with vigor and glory.The grasses grew again like a
blanket,the grasses were green.Nature wakes in spring.Everyone smiled when
they passed forest,because they saw green,it means spring comes again,hope
comes again.And if I was green,I will cheer that people would pleasant when
they saw me.What’s more green also represent peace and happy,I have been read
bible when I was young,and one of the story is very impress me.In the great
flood,bird brought olive branch,the olive branch is green.
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求英语大神帮我检查下这篇作文的语法.If one day I have a chance to be a color,Iwould like to be green.Maybe someone would ask,why green?That primarilybecause the green represent hope.When the chilly winter is gone,and springcomes back
If one day I have a chance to be a color,I
would like to be green.Maybe someone would ask why?That's primarily
because the green represents hope.When the chilly winter is gone,and spring
comes back to awaken the lives on earth,the trees on the hill start to burgeone out
,the leaves are green with vigor and glory.The grasses grow up like a
blanket again,the grasses are green.Nature wakes up in spring.Everyone smiles when
he passes through the forest,because they see the color of green,which means spring comes again and hope
comes again.And if I were green,I would be cheerful for people being pleasant to see
me.What’s more,green also represents peace and happiness,I have read
Bible when I was young,and one of the stories impressed me.during the great
flood,a bird brought the olive branch,and the olive branch is also green.
改了一些时态,用词,和句型.同学你参考一下吧.

f one day I have a chance to be a color, Iwould like to be green.
如果有一天我有机会成为一个颜色,我会喜欢绿色。
Maybe someone would ask, why green?
也许有人会问,为什么绿色?
That primarilybecause the green represen...

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f one day I have a chance to be a color, Iwould like to be green.
如果有一天我有机会成为一个颜色,我会喜欢绿色。
Maybe someone would ask, why green?
也许有人会问,为什么绿色?
That primarilybecause the green represent hope.
这primarilybecause绿色代表希望。
When the chilly winter is gone, and springcomes back to awaken the life on earth, the tree on the hill were just leafingout, the leaves were green with vigor and glory.
当寒冷的冬天过去了,springcomes回到唤醒了地球上的生命,树在山上只是leafingout,树叶是绿色的活力和荣耀。
The grasses grew again like ablanket, the grasses were green.
像ablanket再长草,草是绿色的。
Nature wakes in spring.
大自然在春天醒来。
Everyone smiled whenthey passed forest, because they saw green, it means spring comes again, hopecomes again.
每个人都笑了笑的时候通过了森林,因为他们看到绿色,这意味着春天又来了,又hopecomes。
And if I was green, I will cheer that people would pleasant whenthey saw me.
如果我是绿色的,我必欢呼的时候,人们将看到我愉快。
What’s more green also represent peace and happy, I have been readbible when I was young, and one of the story is very impress me.
更重要的是绿色也代表和平和快乐,我一直readbible当我年轻的时候,其中一个故事是很打动我。
In the greatflood, bird brought olive branch, the olive branch is green.
在greatflood、鸟类带来了橄榄枝,橄榄枝是绿色的。

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