改错：Davy is comping with some friends near a river when Mary shouted,"listen,there's a spaceship up here and it's going to land ."they were very curious.they watched the spaceship to land and saw a door open ,and nobody came out,so they went to

改错：Davy is comping with some friends near a river when Mary shouted,"listen,there's a spaceship up here and it's going to land ."they were very curious.they watched the spaceship to land and saw a door open ,and nobody came out,so they went to
改错：Davy is comping with some friends near a river when Mary shouted,"listen,there's a spaceship up here and it's going to land ."
they were very curious.they watched the spaceship to land and saw a door open ,and nobody came out,so they went to look into it,Mary follow Davy into the spaceship and did not hear the door closed behind here.soon the three young people fell asleep,when they woke up,they were surprised at find that they were by the river again 共有10个错误,10点以前回答的,注明原因的给分

改错：Davy is comping with some friends near a river when Mary shouted,"listen,there's a spaceship up here and it's going to land ."they were very curious.they watched the spaceship to land and saw a door open ,and nobody came out,so they went to
请问是不是高中或者初中的那种改错题哦.应该有一个是对的,只有九处错误吧.is--was
listen--look here--there going--coming open--opened and--but follow--followed 去掉here at--to

1. Davy is comping with some friends near a river when Mary shouted
把is 改成was，因为是过去正在。用过去进行时
2. "listen，there's a spaceship up here and it's going to land ."
把listen改成look！看，因为下边一个...

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1. Davy is comping with some friends near a river when Mary shouted
把is 改成was，因为是过去正在。用过去进行时
2. "listen，there's a spaceship up here and it's going to land ."
把listen改成look！看，因为下边一个飞船在上空，不是听到的是看见的
3. they watched the spaceship to land and saw a door open
把to land 改成land
因为watch sb do sth表示看见某人做某事 ，也指看某人某物的总过程
4. and nobody came out
把and 改成but
他们看见飞船的门开了，但是没有人走出来。从意思上判断and是错误的
5. so they went to look into it,
6. Mary follow Davy into the spaceship
follow 改成 followed
因为通篇都是过去时态，这个也要一致。
7，8. and did not hear the door closed behind here
在and 和did 后边加they，并且把here改成them
他们没有听见他们后边的门关上了，因此不少这里，是他们（them）的后边
9.soon the three young people fell asleep
three 改成two，因为只出想了俩个人，Mary和Dany
10. they were surprised at find
at改成to
他们很惊奇的发现了什么呢？用to做宾语补足语
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Davy was (1) camping (2) with some friends newar a river when Mary shouted," listen! (3) There's a spaceship up here and it's going to land."
They were very curious. They watched the spaceship (to...

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Davy was (1) camping (2) with some friends newar a river when Mary shouted," listen! (3) There's a spaceship up here and it's going to land."
They were very curious. They watched the spaceship (to 去掉）land and saw a door open, and(改成but) nobody came out, so they went to look into it. Mary followed(6) Davy into the spaceship but(7) did not hear the door closed behind here(改成them). soon the three(改成two) young people fell asleep, when they woke up, they were surprised at (改成to)
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