摆脱各位高手帮修改一下英语演讲稿语病可能有点多麻烦大家了 Good morning,my dear classmates and our respectable teacher.First,I want to say that”I’m very happy to have a opportunity to give this speech..Not only because t

摆脱各位高手帮修改一下英语演讲稿语病可能有点多麻烦大家了 Good morning,my dear classmates and our respectable teacher.First,I want to say that”I’m very happy to have a opportunity to give this speech..Not only because t
摆脱各位高手帮修改一下英语演讲稿
语病可能有点多麻烦大家了
Good morning,my dear classmates and our respectable teacher.First,I want to say that”I’m very happy to have a opportunity to give this speech..Not only because this is my first speech,but also I have a chance to prove that I can do it well.”Maybe these are just some words to enourage myself.
Let’s go to today’s topic.My topic is the fifa world cup also called the football world cup.With only a month away from the 2010 football world cup.The football world cup has become a hot topic.The 2010 football world cup will be hold in south Africa from June 11th to July 12th .32 national teams will compete for the final winer.64 exciting matches will be played in the one month.All the games will be in the afternoon or in the evening .we don’t have to stay up anymore.
.If you are a football fan,I’m sure you will be crazy next month.I’m a football fan,what’s more I’m a world cup crazy.I still remember in the Germany football world cup,every day after self-study in the evening,I went home quickly .But the matches were almost at the midnight.After my parents had slept in the fist floor ,I would step up to the second floor quietly.There was a black-and-white television set.It was a hot summer but I have to close all the windows and doors so that my parents couldn’t hear the sound from the television.Can you imagine I stay along in a close and hot rooms with other people slept.And when my favourite scored a goal,I couldn’t cheer like other football fans .But I love it.
If you are not a football fan ,I think you will be also attracted by its fantacination.You can find handsome players and skillful players .you will also be shook by the passion of fans around the world .what I like most is the teamwork and unique personality of each player.
I Hope all of you will have a good time during the football world cup and enjoy the game.

摆脱各位高手帮修改一下英语演讲稿语病可能有点多麻烦大家了 Good morning,my dear classmates and our respectable teacher.First,I want to say that”I’m very happy to have a opportunity to give this speech..Not only because t
我认为没多大的问题!挺不错!

Good morning,my dear classmates and our respectable teacher.First,I want to say that”I’m very happy to have an opportunity to be given this speech..Not only because this is my first speech,but also I ...

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Good morning,my dear classmates and our respectable teacher.First,I want to say that”I’m very happy to have an opportunity to be given this speech..Not only because this is my first speech,but also I have a chance to prove that I can do it well.”Maybe these are just some words to enourage myself.
Let’s go to today’s topic. My topic is the fifa world cup also called the football world cup.With only a month away from the 2010 football world cup.The football world cup has become a hot topic.The 2010 football world cup will be hold in south Africa from June 11th to July 12th .32 national teams will compete for the final winer.64 exciting matches will be played in the one month.All the games will be in the afternoon or in the evening .we don’t have to stay up anymore.
.If you are a football fan,I’m sure you will be crazy next month.I’m a football fan,what’s more I’m a world cup crazy.I still remember in the Germany football world cup,every day after self-study in the evening,I went home quickly .But the matches were almost at the midnight.After my parents had slept in the fist floor ,I would step up to the second floor quietly.There was a black-and-white television set.It was a hot summer but I have to close all the windows and doors so that my parents couldn’t hear the sound from the television.Can you imagine I stay along in a close and hot rooms with other people slept.And when my favourite scored a goal,I couldn’t cheer like other football fans .But I love it.
If you are not a football fan ,I think you will be also attracted by its fantacination.You can find handsome players and skillful players .you will also be shook by the passion of fans around the world .what I like most is the teamwork and unique personality of each player.
I Hope all of you will have a good time during the football world cup and enjoy the game

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very good!
你的英语真不错。
都挺对的，不用该，照说就行