姐姐,这是13年英语2的考研小作文,麻烦您给修改下Direction:suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help.write your classmates an email to 1.inform them about the details,and2.Encourage them to participateDear

姐姐,这是13年英语2的考研小作文,麻烦您给修改下Direction:suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help.write your classmates an email to 1.inform them about the details,and2.Encourage them to participateDear
姐姐,这是13年英语2的考研小作文,麻烦您给修改下
Direction:suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help.write your classmates an email to
1.inform them about the details,and
2.Encourage them to participate
Dear Classmates.
I am writing to inform them that a charity sale will be held by our class on January 3,2014 on our campus.
Now,let me introduce the detailed information about the charity sale to them.To begin with,the aim of holding the charity sale is to assistance the children in the remote area who can not go to school because they cannot afford the tuition fees .What’s more ,you can either sale your books,cloths and other things.All the money from the activity will be used to help the children return to school.
On behalf of all the poor children to express thanks to you and your active participation will be praised.
Yours sincerely ,
Li Ming

姐姐,这是13年英语2的考研小作文,麻烦您给修改下Direction:suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help.write your classmates an email to 1.inform them about the details,and2.Encourage them to participateDear
Dear Classmates.
I am writing to inform you that a charity sale will be held by our class on January 3,2014 in our campus.
Now,let me introduce the detailed information about the charity sale to you.To begin with,the aim of holding the charity sale is to assist the children in the remote area who can not go to school because they cannot afford the tuition .What’s more ,you can sale your books,clothes and other things that are not needed any more.All the money raised from the activity will be used to help the children return to school.
On behalf of all the poor children,I'd like to express thanks to you and your active participation will be appreciated.
Yours sincerely ,
Li Ming
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作为一个过来人，我给您提几条参考建议： 首先，你要搞清自己想要读研的目的何在。多数人都认为其目的是找一份好的工作，既然如此，若本科毕业能够找到理想的工作，可以考虑先工作几年，等想充电的时候再读研也不迟。如暂时没找到合适的工作，不妨考虑先读研。 其次，你要考虑好自己的实力，毕竟考研和找工作会有些冲突。如果认为自己有足够的实力，不妨作一个两手准备，在考研的同时兼顾找工作。 最后，我想家庭的经济势力也是自己应该考虑的一个方面。如果经济状况不允许，还是先工作较好。 希望以上几条建议能够给您以帮助

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