大家好...能不能用英语帮我翻译这3条中文..1当他回过神来的时候,那颗流星已经消失在天际了.2他装作在和小孩子们玩耍,事实上,他正密切注意着罪犯们的行动.3他采用了一种复杂的方式来整

大家好...能不能用英语帮我翻译这3条中文..1当他回过神来的时候,那颗流星已经消失在天际了.2他装作在和小孩子们玩耍,事实上,他正密切注意着罪犯们的行动.3他采用了一种复杂的方式来整
大家好...能不能用英语帮我翻译这3条中文..1当他回过神来的时候,那颗流星已经消失在天际了.2他装作在和小孩子们玩耍,事实上,他正密切注意着罪犯们的行动.3他采用了一种复杂的方式来整理(work up)他的账单,想当然地认为（assume)他可以在短时间内计算出准确的数目．

大家好...能不能用英语帮我翻译这3条中文..1当他回过神来的时候,那颗流星已经消失在天际了.2他装作在和小孩子们玩耍,事实上,他正密切注意着罪犯们的行动.3他采用了一种复杂的方式来整
1.When he Huiguoshenlai a time meteoroids have happened.
2.Disappeared in the sky in his pretending and children were playing,in fact,he is paying close attention to the actions of criminals .
3.He used a complex approach to processing (work up) his bills,assumed that (assume) he can be calculated accurately in a short period of time the number.

1. When he knew it, the shooting star had disappeared from the skyline.
2. He pretended to be playing with the kids, but actually he was closely watching the criminals' move.
3. He used a complex method to work up his bills, assuming that he could make out the accurate figure in a short time.

哈哈，huiguoshenlai，看到这个翻译，我要笑翻了。
1.The meteoroid had already disappeared before he was able to respond.(这个也不是很好，我本来想用come to himself, be aware, say a wish之类的，但是，回过神来的意思又不是这么具体）
2. Pretending to ...

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哈哈，huiguoshenlai，看到这个翻译，我要笑翻了。
1.The meteoroid had already disappeared before he was able to respond.(这个也不是很好，我本来想用come to himself, be aware, say a wish之类的，但是，回过神来的意思又不是这么具体）
2. Pretending to be playing games with kids, he was actually keeping these criminals under close watch.
3.With a complicate method to work up his bills/accountings, he still assumed that he was able to make an accurate count in no time.
楼下的那个梵高，请你仔细检查一下自己的拼写、单复数再来大吹法螺罢。
另外，L49J，第二句不要用trying to pretend这种结构，不是试图装，而是本来就在装。还有，尽量不要用play with sb这个结构，有玩弄/亵玩/不严肃对待等不好的意思（尤其不要play with yourself，哈哈）。第三句的结构不对，took for granted 最好改成taking for granted; 或者在前面加上and。
此外，流星用shooting star 的确更好一点，在《勇敢者的游戏2》里面好像就用的这个词。

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楼上的写得好好！！我只是修改了一些单词 有的愈发我觉得不对我修改了一下 不知道对不对
1当他回过神来的时候,那颗流星已经消失在天际了.
Before he was able to respond the shooting star had already disappeared
2他装作在和小孩子们玩耍,事实上,他正密切注意着罪犯们的行动. He's trying to p...

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楼上的写得好好！！我只是修改了一些单词 有的愈发我觉得不对我修改了一下 不知道对不对
1当他回过神来的时候,那颗流星已经消失在天际了.
Before he was able to respond the shooting star had already disappeared
2他装作在和小孩子们玩耍,事实上,他正密切注意着罪犯们的行动. He's trying to pretend to play with the kids, but he's actually watching out for criminals' motion.
3他采用了一种复杂的方式来整理(work up)他的账单，想当然地认为（assume)他可以在短时间内计算出准确的数目．He selected one complex method to work up his bill, took for granted thought that he might calculate the accurate number in a short time.

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1当他回过神来的时候,那颗流星已经消失在天际了.
before he get back into his mind, the shooting star had slipped over the sky
2他装作在和小孩子们玩耍,事实上,他正密切注意着罪犯们的行动.
he pretend to be playing with the kids, but the fact ...

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1当他回过神来的时候,那颗流星已经消失在天际了.
before he get back into his mind, the shooting star had slipped over the sky
2他装作在和小孩子们玩耍,事实上,他正密切注意着罪犯们的行动.
he pretend to be playing with the kids, but the fact is that he was looking at criminals' behavior
3他采用了一种复杂的方式来整理(work up)他的账单，想当然地认为（assume)他可以在短时间内计算出准确的数目
he used a very complex way to work up his bills, just simply assumed that he could end up a exact number in a short time.
呵呵，楼上几位都不怎么样，还是俺滴好

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