我第一次写英语电子邮件,帮我看一看有没有语法和格式上的错误Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me AbbyDo you remember me?Your Chinese friend!We met at the "say t

我第一次写英语电子邮件,帮我看一看有没有语法和格式上的错误Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me AbbyDo you remember me?Your Chinese friend!We met at the "say t
我第一次写英语电子邮件,帮我看一看有没有语法和格式上的错误
Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me AbbyDo you remember me?Your Chinese friend!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail,Later please use this email writing to me .If you want to better understand China,email me.Keep in touch,I look forward to hearing from you.Abby
现在是改过的，
Dear badradio,(sorry，I forgot your real name,so I used your email name )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me Abby.Do you remember me?One of Your Chinese friends!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address.Please writing to me later.If you want to better understand China,email me，never mind.
Keep in touch，I am looking forward to your early reply.
Your sincerely
Abbey

我第一次写英语电子邮件,帮我看一看有没有语法和格式上的错误Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me AbbyDo you remember me?Your Chinese friend!We met at the "say t
顶一下,你写的挺好的.只有很小的错误.下面是帮你改过的.
Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me Abby.Do you remember me?One of Your Chinese friends!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address.Please use this email from now on.If you want to better understand China,email me.Keep in touch,I look forward to hearing from you.Abby

Dear badradio, (I forgot your real name, so I've used your email account name instead , sorry for that)
This is Yuxin Zhao. You can call me Abby. Do you still remember me? Your Chinese friend! We ...

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Dear badradio, (I forgot your real name, so I've used your email account name instead , sorry for that)
This is Yuxin Zhao. You can call me Abby. Do you still remember me? Your Chinese friend! We met at the "Say The Same Thing". This is my new e-mail address. Please reply my letter using this e-mail address .If you want to better understand China, feel free to email me.
Keep in touch, I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Abby

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Dear badradio, (sorry，I forgot your real name, so I used your email name )
This is Yuxin Zhao. You can call me Abby，Do you remember me? Your Chinese friend! We met at the "say the same thing"....

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Dear badradio, (sorry，I forgot your real name, so I used your email name )
This is Yuxin Zhao. You can call me Abby，Do you remember me? Your Chinese friend! We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address, please writing to me later. If you want to understand China better, email me, never mind.
Keep in touch，I look forward to hearing from you.
your sincerely
Abbey

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Dear badradio,
正文
yours,
sincerely
XXX

另外，最后一句祝福最好另起一段，与前面内容分开单写，I am looking forward to your early reply.个人感觉用 my dear...

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Dear badradio,
正文
yours,
sincerely
XXX

另外，最后一句祝福最好另起一段，与前面内容分开单写，I am looking forward to your early reply.个人感觉用 my dear friend为题目较好

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