这篇英语作文语法错误帮我改改,In high school,we were eager to enter an ideal college..We are now freshmen in university.My ideal college is a place which has good learning atmosphere and has colorful activities.College should be wonderfu

这篇英语作文语法错误帮我改改,In high school,we were eager to enter an ideal college..We are now freshmen in university.My ideal college is a place which has good learning atmosphere and has colorful activities.College should be wonderfu
这篇英语作文语法错误帮我改改,
In high school,we were eager to
enter an ideal college..We are now freshmen in university.My
ideal college is a place which has good learning atmosphere and has
colorful activities.College should
be wonderful.
For general students,ideal college can train
specialized persons.College provides perfect conditions.
///////Students can make full of resources to apply for a good job.University is just in order to get a
job in their eyes.They think that college life is too easy.In my
eyes,university is not only looking for
a good job but to also change yourself.
Firstly,we can read a
lot of books in library to increase knowledge.College provides a large number of
books.Secondly,there are many activities to improve quality and make
friends.Thirdly,we can discuss different topics with students and professors.
Finally,wo have the opportunity to experience social life,which can help me more
independent.
In a word ,in my eyes,ideal college should change ourselves
from all aspects,rather than taking
the dilemma to find a job
.

这篇英语作文语法错误帮我改改,In high school,we were eager to enter an ideal college..We are now freshmen in university.My ideal college is a place which has good learning atmosphere and has colorful activities.College should be wonderfu
In high school,we were eager to
enter an ideal college..We are now freshmen in university.My
ideal college is a place 【where】 has good learning atmosphere and 【去掉has】
colorful activities.College should
be wonderful.
For general students,ideal college can train
specialized persons.College provides perfect conditions 【for them】.
///////Students can make full of resources to apply for a good job.University is just in order to get a
job in their eyes.They think that college life is too easy.In my
eyes,【attending】university is not only 【to look】 for
a good job but 【also to】 change yourself.
Firstly,we can read a
lot of books in library to increase knowledge.College provides a large number of
books.Secondly,there are many activities to improve 【 qualities of our life】 and make
friends.Thirdly,we can discuss different topics with students and professors.
Finally,【we】 have the opportunity to experience social life,which can help 【us to be】 more
independent.
In a word ,in my eyes,ideal college should 【be able to】 change ourselves
【in】 all aspects,【so that we won't have to take a】
dilemma to find a job