一片英语小短文麻烦检查一下有错吗my sunday It's sunday today.I got up at 8 o'clock.Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth.I cleaned my room too.I had breakfast at half past five.And then I go for a walk in the park near my home.I d
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一片英语小短文麻烦检查一下有错吗my sunday It's sunday today.I got up at 8 o'clock.Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth.I cleaned my room too.I had breakfast at half past five.And then I go for a walk in the park near my home.I d
一片英语小短文麻烦检查一下有错吗
my sunday
It's sunday today.I got up at 8 o'clock.Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth.I cleaned my room too.I had breakfast at half past five.And then I go for a walk in the park near my home.I did my homework at ten o'clock.I had lunch at 12 o'clock.I went shopping in the afternoon.I also played computer games.In the evening,I watched TV.I go to bed at ten o'clock.
一片英语小短文麻烦检查一下有错吗my sunday It's sunday today.I got up at 8 o'clock.Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth.I cleaned my room too.I had breakfast at half past five.And then I go for a walk in the park near my home.I d
sunday改Sunday,go for a walk改went for a walk,
go to bed 改 went to bed
我个人觉得,It's sunday today不妥,它的时态和文章不符,改成it was Sunday today,可能稍微好一点,但是从文章来说,整件事叙述的是发生的事情,而且最后说10：00
去睡觉了,如果不用过去时,那就该说I will go to bed ...来叙述还没发生的事情,假如你想表达已经发生的事情,就是在叙述你那天的行为,那就改用过去时,也就是说睡觉发生在你写作文的过去,那么你都睡觉了,在梦里写作文?所以,我建议你改成开头为that day was Sunday,或者it was Sunday that day更合适
你说呢?
I had breakfast at half past five.你8点起床的怎么5点半就吃饭了？
And then I go for a walk in the park near my home 应该是..I went for a walk...
动词时态不固定，比如：前面是is,后面又用了got，washed，did，had等过去式，最后面又用了go.
不必使用过去式，全文都使用现代式就可以。
很好
除了语法有些不对
我晕死..楼上的..说话要慎重..
这是写日记..全文都应该用 一般过去式!!!
然后问题就是:写得太生硬...都是I呀I的.让人觉得好累..好不连贯..不过一个初中生写出这样的来是正常的.呵呵,,加油!
it's 可以是it is 也可以是it was.语法没什么错误,随着英语学习的深入,你的句型量就会增大的.那时你的文章就会更好的.