麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英语周记!National DayThis week we have no class,because this is National Day.In October 1 .It was sunny.The weather was beautiful.In the morning,I went out with my mom.We went to mountain to take a walk.There was a l

麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英语周记!National DayThis week we have no class,because this is National Day.In October 1 .It was sunny.The weather was beautiful.In the morning,I went out with my mom.We went to mountain to take a walk.There was a l
麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英语周记!
National Day
This week we have no class,because this is National Day.
In October 1 .It was sunny.The weather was beautiful.In the morning,I went out with my mom.We went to mountain to take a walk.There was a lot of people in the mountain.We saw some people to do morning exercise,some people running……My mom said “There is beautiful.Here air is really fresh.I like there.”
In October 2 .My aunt came my family.She wanted to surf the Internet for search datum.I helped her search some darum.She was very happy.She said “You are good child.”
In October 3 .My good friends got back.I played with them.We went to our alma mater.We all very like there.That was great.Then we went to the library.We read some books there.We was very happy.
In October 4 .I went to barber shop with my mom.The barber cut hair for our.I saw my friend.She saw my new look is very surprised.
In October 5 .I visit my uncle.He watched TV at home.I helped him clean the room.He taught me play chess.I stayed until 6 o’clock.That was relaxing.
This is my National vacation.It was relaxing and great!
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麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英语周记!National DayThis week we have no class,because this is National Day.In October 1 .It was sunny.The weather was beautiful.In the morning,I went out with my mom.We went to mountain to take a walk.There was a l
1 We saw some people to do morning exercise
to do ----doing
2 My aunt came my family
family----home
3 “You are good child.”
are+a+good child
4 We was very happy.
was----were
5 The barber cut hair for our
our----us
6 He watched TV at home.
watched----was watching
7 He taught me play chess.
play----to play
大概就是这些吧
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