请英语高手给我修改一下这段话的错误帮我改正下语法错误什么的...A:Where would you like to go on vacation?B:I want to go somewhere warm.How about you?A:I'd like to visit Xia Men.B:Could you tell me more about the city?A:Sure.

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请英语高手给我修改一下这段话的错误帮我改正下语法错误什么的...A:Wherewouldyouliketogoonvacation?B:Iwanttogosomewherewarm.Howabouty

请英语高手给我修改一下这段话的错误帮我改正下语法错误什么的...A:Where would you like to go on vacation?B:I want to go somewhere warm.How about you?A:I'd like to visit Xia Men.B:Could you tell me more about the city?A:Sure.
请英语高手给我修改一下这段话的错误
帮我改正下语法错误什么的...
A:Where would you like to go on vacation?
B:I want to go somewhere warm.How about you?
A:I'd like to visit Xia Men.
B:Could you tell me more about the city?
A:Sure.It's a famous tourist city with long history.
B:Oh.great! And what's your hope?
A:I hope to meet a famous peason.I think it's cool.
B:I don't think so.I want to be a policeman.
A:It's a great dream.But i think as a policeman is dangerous.
B:Yes.It's a little dangrous.
A:Bye
B:Bye

请英语高手给我修改一下这段话的错误帮我改正下语法错误什么的...A:Where would you like to go on vacation?B:I want to go somewhere warm.How about you?A:I'd like to visit Xia Men.B:Could you tell me more about the city?A:Sure.
第一句：where would you like to go for vacation?
第六句：B:Oh.great!（衔接不太连贯） And what's your hope?表达志向理想时hope换为ideal比较好.
第七句A:I hope to meet a famous peason.I think it's cool.改为：I hope to become a famous person.
第九句：A:It's a great dream.But i think as a policeman is dangerous改为：But I think the occupation（职业）of policeman is dangerous.

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