会英语的来.帮我改改句子,拜托了it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long times . they can do many outdoor activities instead of watching tv . that's good star . a film star or a actor. they will spending more times on watching tv . it

会英语的来.帮我改改句子,拜托了it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long times . they can do many outdoor activities instead of watching tv . that's good star . a film star or a actor. they will spending more times on watching tv . it
会英语的来.帮我改改句子,拜托了
it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long times . they can do many outdoor activities instead of watching tv . that's good star . a film star or a actor. they will spending more times on watching tv . it will be a wast of time for them . their parents expect them can be a useful person . in the future . They spend life time in teaching them to do a successful person. so they shouldn't let their parents feel disappointed

会英语的来.帮我改改句子,拜托了it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long times . they can do many outdoor activities instead of watching tv . that's good star . a film star or a actor. they will spending more times on watching tv . it
这里我只是简单的改一些语法上的错误.【】处是修改的地方或者添加的地方.
it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long 【time】.最后一个是time而不是times.
that's 【a 】good star ,a film star or 【an】 actor.前面少了a,第二个是是an,因为actor的第一个读音是元音.
they will 【spend 】more 【time】 on watching tv will后面直接加动词原形就可以了,time的问题同上.
their parents expect them 【to】 be a useful person
They spend 【lifelong】 time 【on】 teaching them to 【be】 a successful person.

It's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long. They can do many outdoor activities instead of watching TV . （That's a good star . a film star or a actor）.(你想表达什么看不懂) They will spend more time watch...

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It's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long. They can do many outdoor activities instead of watching TV . （That's a good star . a film star or a actor）.(你想表达什么看不懂) They will spend more time watching TV . It will be a waste of time for them . Their parents expect them to be a useful person in the future . They spend all their life in teaching them to be a successful person, so they shouldn't let their parents feel disappointed.
我加了括号的地方我没看懂，其他的地方改完了，
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It's bad for their eyes to watch TV too long.They should do many outdoor activities instead of watching TV.That's a good star a film star.They spend too much time in watching TV,which is just a waste...

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It's bad for their eyes to watch TV too long.They should do many outdoor activities instead of watching TV.That's a good star a film star.They spend too much time in watching TV,which is just a waste of time for them.Their parents expect them to be useful persons in the future and spend a lot of time in teaching them to be successful persons.
So in my opinion, the children shouldn't make their parents feel disappointed .
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