请高手帮帮我改改我英语作文里的错误一Today,I would rather I had a job.If I had a job now,I would make much money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if were at work,I also can g

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请高手帮帮我改改我英语作文里的错误一Today,IwouldratherIhadajob.IfIhadajobnow,Iwouldmakemuchmoney.However,Iamstudyingin

请高手帮帮我改改我英语作文里的错误一Today,I would rather I had a job.If I had a job now,I would make much money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if were at work,I also can g
请高手帮帮我改改我英语作文里的错误
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Today,I would rather I had a job.
If I had a job now,I would make much money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if were at work,I also can get much experience and knowledge.I think it will be make me more wonderful.To be the truth,I am very regret to study here.If I had not choose to study here,I think I would be happy now.In addition,If I were rich,I would buy a house for my parents.I want to live a life of ease and make people around me have a good life.In all,I will try my best exertions to study and I can find a good job.
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I wish I were a boy!
I still remembered that when I was a child,my parents ofter said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy,my father would not have lost his job,my family would be a good family.
Were I a boy,I would try my best to learn knowledge as much as possible.Because in order to support the family,parents try their best to work hard.I want to let them live a happy life.
If only I were a boy!
If I were a boy,I would help the girls who need help.
If I were a boy,I would take good care of my love and protect she.
If I were a boy,I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
If I were a boy,I would…

请高手帮帮我改改我英语作文里的错误一Today,I would rather I had a job.If I had a job now,I would make much money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if were at work,I also can g
Today, I would rather have a job.
If I had a job now, I would make much money. However, I am still studying in the college. To be frank, I would rather have a job. (Because 一般不用在句首,此处不用亦可)I think if i were at work, I can get not only knowledge,but also much experience. I think that will make my life more wonderful.To tell the truth, I am very regret to have studied here. Had i not chosen to study here, I think I would be happier now. I also want to be rich. If i were rich, I would buy a house for my parents. I want to live an easy life and make people around me have a good life. In all, I will try my best to study and find a good job.
I wish I were a boy!
I still remembere when I was a child, my parents often said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” If I were a boy, my father would not have lost his job,and my family would be a good family.
Were I a boy, I would try my best to learn knowledge as much as possible.In order to support the family,my parents tried their best to work hard. I want to let them live a happy life.
If only I were a boy!
If I were a boy, I would help the girls who need help.
If I were a boy, I would take good care of my love and protect her.
If I were a boy, I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
If I were a boy, I would…

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