请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误是过去式的作文来的: A xisit to Baiyun Mountain We visted to Baiyun Mountain. In moring,we went to school at 8:00

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请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误是过去式的作文来的:AxisittoBaiyunMountainWevistedtoBaiyunMountain.Inmoring,wewenttosch

请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误是过去式的作文来的: A xisit to Baiyun Mountain We visted to Baiyun Mountain. In moring,we went to school at 8:00
请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误
是过去式的作文来的:
A xisit to Baiyun Mountain
We visted to Baiyun Mountain. In moring,we went to school at 8:00 a.m. Our went to Baiyun Mountain by bus.We often felt happy.I like the plan.After we went to Baiyun Mountain.Some are tookl photo.Some are singed . Some are played game;If you like take photo,you will go to Baiyun Mountain.There are very good photos.Everyone go to Baiyun Mountain.You feel is a happy.In Afernoon.We went to school at 5:00 p.m. in the yuntai garden.We had a good times .

请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误是过去式的作文来的: A xisit to Baiyun Mountain We visted to Baiyun Mountain. In moring,we went to school at 8:00
看了一下,是有一点错误,我改了一下.
A xisit to Baiyun Mountain
We visted to Baiyun Mountain.In moring,we went to school at 8:00 a.m.We went to Baiyun Mountain by bus.We felt happy.I like the plan.After we went to Baiyun Mountain.Many friend are took photo.Someone are singed .Someone are played game;If you like take photo,you will go to Baiyun Mountain.There are many good scenery .Everyone go to Baiyun Mountain can feel happy.In Afernoon.We went to school at 5:00 p.m.in the yuntai garden.We had a good times .
oh,I like Baiyun Mouyain very much .I can't forget this day.
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visted拼错了吧 In moring 我觉得是in the morning,Some are tookl photo.Some are singed . Some are played game 不是过去是吗 be动词错了也不是被动怎么这样用呢？？或者用动词的ing形式也可以 a good times好像不用加s 我的水...

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