寻找英语病句这是我自己写的英语片段,请指点错误的地方.谢谢! At 12:00 o’clock.The Field family going toshopping.They buy some food and fruit for birt

寻找英语病句这是我自己写的英语片段,请指点错误的地方.谢谢! At 12:00 o’clock.The Field family going toshopping.They buy some food and fruit for birt
寻找英语病句
这是我自己写的英语片段,请指点错误的地方.谢谢!
At 12:00 o’clock.The Field family going toshopping.They buy some food and fruit for birthday party. Mrs.Hunter:Hello! Stacey Field:Hello!Mrs.Hunter. Mrs.Hunter:Where is yougoing to? Stacey Field:Oh!I’ll go to shopping. Mrs.Hunter:Well!Do you want some bananas? Stacey Field:Yes!What do you have suggestion? Mrs.Hunter:They sell all their bananas at very good prices. Stacey Field:Thank you!Bye! Mrs.Hunter: Bye! At 13:00 o’clock she buy lots and lots of fruit and food,they're readyto return home.
Stacey Field:Mom!Can you help me? Stacey Field:Mom?Are you at home? Mrs.Field:What's up? Stacey Field:I’m busy.Can you help me totake care of Thtise? Mrs.Field:Sure! At 14:15 o’clock Thtise’s partner gettingto Field’s home.and Scott Field getting to home,too.

寻找英语病句这是我自己写的英语片段,请指点错误的地方.谢谢! At 12:00 o’clock.The Field family going toshopping.They buy some food and fruit for birt
At 12:00, the Field family goes to shopping. The family is going to buy some food and fruit for the birthday party.
Mrs. Hunter: Hello!
Stacey Field: Hello! Mrs. Hunter.
Mrs. Hunter: Where are you going to?
Stacey Field: Oh! I am going to shopping.
Mrs. Hunter: Well! Do you want some bananas?
Stacey Field: Yes! Why do you have this suggestion?
Mrs. Hunter: They sell all their bananas at very good prices.
Stacey Field: Thank you! Bye!
Mrs. Hunter: Bye!

At 13:00, they have bought lots and lots of fruit and food; and they're ready to return home.
Stacey Field: Mom! Can you help me?
Stacey Field: Mom? Are you at home?
Mrs. Field: What's up?
Stacey Field: I’m busy. Can you help me to take care of Thtise?
Mrs. Field: Sure!

At 14:15, Thtise’s partner goes to Field’s home, and Scott Field returns to home, too.