请大师们帮我看看语法的错误!We have to apply for the certificate review with the Government, but this process takes about two months, because the Chinese government is quite strict food safety management.We will try to shorten the time to

请大师们帮我看看语法的错误!We have to apply for the certificate review with the Government, but this process takes about two months, because the Chinese government is quite strict food safety management.We will try to shorten the time to
请大师们帮我看看语法的错误!
We have to apply for the certificate review with the Government, but this process takes about two months, because the Chinese government is quite strict food safety management.We will try to shorten the time to audit the import process to accelerate.
我们必须办理相关的证书审核跟政府,而这个过程需要大概2个月时间,因为中国政府对食品安全管理比较严最近.我们将在尽量缩短审核的时间使进口进程加快.
这事我用google翻译的,我感觉语法错了不少有好心人帮帮忙吗!帮我审核下看看

请大师们帮我看看语法的错误!We have to apply for the certificate review with the Government, but this process takes about two months, because the Chinese government is quite strict food safety management.We will try to shorten the time to
We have to apply for the certificate review from the Government,but this process will take about two months due to the recently intensified food safety management by the Chinese government.We will try our best to shorten the auditing time in order to quicken the import process.

第一句：
have to是不得不，用在这里不合适，应该用must,而with是表示伴随状态，这里是和、跟，应该用and，第一句就应该是这样：
We must handle the relevant certificate audit and government.
第二句是正确的。
第三句：
对什么严格，应该是be strict with,
beca...

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第一句：
have to是不得不，用在这里不合适，应该用must,而with是表示伴随状态，这里是和、跟，应该用and，第一句就应该是这样：
We must handle the relevant certificate audit and government.
第二句是正确的。
第三句：
对什么严格，应该是be strict with,
because the Chinese government is quite strict with the food safety management recently(最近）.
第四句是正确的

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大致没错，有些小问题
1.because 前面的逗号去掉，这是从属连词，不要逗号。
2. is quite strict about/on food safety management.缺少介词
3. to shorten the time of audit and accelerate the import process 语句不通顺

to the government
.But this process
.Because the Chinese
is quite strict with food safety.We will
shorten the time of the audition to accelerate the import.