帮我纠正下错误的语法,Fifth,I participated in the 14th Annual China International Fair for Investment and Trade and met a lot of foreigners there.I seek every chance to communicate English with them.I learn that as an English major we must c

帮我纠正下错误的语法,Fifth,I participated in the 14th Annual China International Fair for Investment and Trade and met a lot of foreigners there.I seek every chance to communicate English with them.I learn that as an English major we must c
帮我纠正下错误的语法,
Fifth,I participated in the 14th Annual China International Fair for Investment and Trade and met a lot of foreigners there.I seek every chance to communicate English with them.I learn that as an English major we must cherish every chance to practice English every time and every where.Sixth,Desperate Housewives is a popular teleplay among the America even among china.I watch it everyday and write down the key words and the important sentences.I speak them aloud every morning over and over again.I can learn many new words and English proverbs in this way.Seventh,singing the English songs not only I can relax myself but also I can learn many new words.Eighth,I am used to listening to the news every night,which I can learn some news in this way and I always talk them with my friends the next mornings.Ninth,sometimes we have role playing with my English.We play in turn and ask others advices on pronunciation,intonation and action in order to do well the next time.Tenth,we will have hot-spot debate at the weekend.We talk about the recent issue or problem together in English.It can help me speak English fluently.And I can know about the important event happened recently.

帮我纠正下错误的语法,Fifth,I participated in the 14th Annual China International Fair for Investment and Trade and met a lot of foreigners there.I seek every chance to communicate English with them.I learn that as an English major we must c
All are following the order of ur short paragraph.
- a lot of - an informal word but it is okay.
- seek - sought
- communicate with them in English
- I have learned that,as an English major person,I must cherish every chance to practice English every time and everywhere.
- both in America and in China.(really popular?I don't think so)
- Listening to English songs is not only a way to relax myself but also a way to assist me with memorizing new words.
- happened to occurred
etc...
(pay more attention to ur sentence structures,past tense and logical thoughts.In addition,u need some translation words.)