英语 帮忙改正错误,I am a senior student and I have a英语I am a senior student and I have a lot of homework to do everyday.I feel my burden is so heavy but in order to my future i have to study hard,批评指出 感激不尽

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英语帮忙改正错误,IamaseniorstudentandIhavea英语IamaseniorstudentandIhavealotofhomeworktodoeveryday.Ifeelmyburd

英语 帮忙改正错误,I am a senior student and I have a英语I am a senior student and I have a lot of homework to do everyday.I feel my burden is so heavy but in order to my future i have to study hard,批评指出 感激不尽
英语 帮忙改正错误,I am a senior student and I have a
英语
I am a senior student and I have a lot of homework to do everyday.I feel my burden is so heavy but in order to my future i have to study hard,
批评指出 感激不尽

英语 帮忙改正错误,I am a senior student and I have a英语I am a senior student and I have a lot of homework to do everyday.I feel my burden is so heavy but in order to my future i have to study hard,批评指出 感激不尽
没有senior student这么一说 ,一般senior high school student
everyday直接删掉 .天 你的问题太多了.
主要是太chinglish
I AM A STUDENT IN SENIOR HIGH SCHOOL .I FEEL EXHAUSTED BECAUSE OF THE BURDEN OF HOMEWORK ,BUT I HAVE TO STUDY HARD FOR FUTURE LIFE.
burden本身就有沉重 不要再加heavy 语义重复
in order to指的是干了某事是为了 I RUNNING EVERY DAY IN ORDER TO KEEP FIT.
句式重复啰嗦

in order for

in order to 之后最好不加名词，可把后面一句改成but i must study hard in order tohave a good future 。

最后的“，”改成“.”

a lots of
but for my future

in order to 换成 for ，改成 study hard for my future ，，

I am a senior student, and I have a lot of homework to do every day.I feel my responsibility is so heavy, but for my future, I have to study hard.
in order to 应该也能用，只是我觉得有点奇怪

最后一个 i 要大写！最后的标点要用句点！

in order to 改成for

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