我这句英文写的好么?有错误么?有需要改正的地方么I neither drink nor smoke,don't have sex and play no video games either.The purpose of my being such stoic is to hone myself in order to become stronger faster and smarter
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我这句英文写的好么?有错误么?有需要改正的地方么I neither drink nor smoke,don't have sex and play no video games either.The purpose of my being such stoic is to hone myself in order to become stronger faster and smarter
我这句英文写的好么?有错误么?有需要改正的地方么
I neither drink nor smoke,don't have sex and play no video games either.The purpose of my being such stoic is to hone myself in order to become stronger faster and smarter
我这句英文写的好么?有错误么?有需要改正的地方么I neither drink nor smoke,don't have sex and play no video games either.The purpose of my being such stoic is to hone myself in order to become stronger faster and smarter
I don't drink or smoke ,I'm a virgin and I don't fancy those video games neither,The reason why I being so decent is in order to become better faster and stronger.( better faster stronger 是从kanye west 的巅峰之作stronger 中引用的,这样的形容词顺序会增色不少.）
好，很好，非常好
还是有一定问题的，一个句子只能有一个主语，第二句要在don't have sex之前加主语I,最后一句要有标点stronger、faster and smarter，个别表达有些Chinese English，最好修改下
标点符号不明确。