可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文吗I believed radio has continued to be popular in the age of television.we have to admire the television can see and listen.uesing television is more convience and clarity.but it is harmful for your eyes.whe

可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文吗I believed radio has continued to be popular in the age of television.we have to admire the television can see and listen.uesing television is more convience and clarity.but it is harmful for your eyes.whe
可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文吗
I believed radio has continued to be popular in the age of television.
we have to admire the television can see and listen.uesing television is more convience and clarity.but it is harmful for your eyes.
when you are tired.you can open the radio,listen the music and go to bed.It is very comfortable.
With the developing of the society,it is very important for us to how to get latest information.the radio is very small.you can take it in any case.if so,you can also quickly learn about the world by it.
what is more.when you use it,it don't infect your work on your hand.you can save your time.
above all,the radio also still is popular.

可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文吗I believed radio has continued to be popular in the age of television.we have to admire the television can see and listen.uesing television is more convience and clarity.but it is harmful for your eyes.whe
I believed (改成believe)（这里加一个that）radio has continued to be popular in the age of television.
we have to admire (这里加一个that) the television can see and listen(改成watching and listening).uesing television is more convience and clarity.（改成逗号）but it is harmful for your（改成our,与前面we一致） eyes.
when you are tired.you can open the radio,listen （改成listening）（加to）the music and（加then） go to bed.It is very comfortable.
With the developing （改成development 有名词形式的动词我们不用分词结构）of the society,it is very important for us to（加know） how to get （加the）latest information.the radio is very small.you can take it in any case.if so,you can also quickly learn about the world by it.
what is more.when you （加are）use（改成using） it,it don't infect your work on your hand.you can save your time.
above all,the radio also still is popular（改成the radio is still popular）