A English poem writen by myself .reasons for quitquit for u don't care mequit for ur eyes not on mequit for I don't wanna be hurtquit for stopping missing uquit for I have sth important to do quit for I wanna live a bright lifequit for I'd like to di
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A English poem writen by myself .reasons for quitquit for u don't care mequit for ur eyes not on mequit for I don't wanna be hurtquit for stopping missing uquit for I have sth important to do quit for I wanna live a bright lifequit for I'd like to di
A English poem writen by myself .
reasons for quit
quit for u don't care me
quit for ur eyes not on me
quit for I don't wanna be hurt
quit for stopping missing u
quit for I have sth important to do
quit for I wanna live a bright life
quit for I'd like to dip the previous love deep in my broken heart
quit for my heart had beaten with urs
quit for I had given all I had to you
quit for what I had done my best for you doesn't change ur mind
quit for I don't wanna live in the memory or ideal imagine
If u see this ,u'll know
This is a poem ,I wanna show it to my love to let her know what I am feeling .
dear friends ,can you correct some of my words or mistakes to make this poem more
heart-stirring.
If u do I'll give you a high grades
A English poem writen by myself .reasons for quitquit for u don't care mequit for ur eyes not on mequit for I don't wanna be hurtquit for stopping missing uquit for I have sth important to do quit for I wanna live a bright lifequit for I'd like to di
倒数第三行两个had应用have
真的很抱歉,楼主您的诗句估计只有中国人看得懂……
就连最中心的词都用错了。quit不是用在这个地方。就算是give up也比quit好上千倍。其他的语句也是看着很别扭……
但是您如果只是为了写给那个人看的,而那个人也是中国人,也懂得看一些英文,那么你的表达也许还是有用的……但即使是这样,我仍然建议您用自己最拿手的汉语,来充分表达最确切的意思,否则真的是画虎不成反类犬……
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真的很抱歉,楼主您的诗句估计只有中国人看得懂……
就连最中心的词都用错了。quit不是用在这个地方。就算是give up也比quit好上千倍。其他的语句也是看着很别扭……
但是您如果只是为了写给那个人看的,而那个人也是中国人,也懂得看一些英文,那么你的表达也许还是有用的……但即使是这样,我仍然建议您用自己最拿手的汉语,来充分表达最确切的意思,否则真的是画虎不成反类犬……
我说的比较刺耳,我就不指望楼主能给最佳答案了,但我说的都是衷心话……
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too many.go to die
这是啥诗 外国人肯定看不懂