谁帮我看看语句通不通顺2My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,w

谁帮我看看语句通不通顺2My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,w
谁帮我看看语句通不通顺2
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.I like painting,my dream is to become a painter.把汉语也写在下面~
帮我用英语介绍小眼睛、胖同学的英语短文（好朋友）要有中文！

谁帮我看看语句通不通顺2My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,w
你的英文不错嘛,仅仅建议更改一个单词my younger brother and I（me）.
my classmate is very fat and with small eyes, and he's my good friend
我的同学小眼睛,很肥,他是我的好朋友

My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I haven't got an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 people in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I. love my family. I like playing with my younger brother who is lovely.I like painting,my dream is to be a painter.

My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I haven't got an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 people in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I. love my family. I like playing with my y...

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My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I haven't got an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 people in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I. love my family. I like playing with my younger brother who is lovely.I like painting,my dream is to be a painter.
把你的名字换成你同学的，然后把一些基本情况放进去就可以了，你的作文还是很不错的。
主要句型如下：
I have two little black eye.我有一双小眼睛。
I like swimming(running/playing basketball).我喜欢游泳（跑步、打篮球、）
I'm a little fat and i'm friendly to my friends.我有点胖但是我对朋友很友好。
I love painting.我喜欢画画。
I prefer red to blue.我喜欢红色胜过蓝色。

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