帮我改改语法什么的After nearly 3 or 4 mouth basketball practice,in 12th of February our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS.It is a different experience to me; I had never play basketball before and also had never gone to Mongolia before.So eve

帮我改改语法什么的After nearly 3 or 4 mouth basketball practice,in 12th of February our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS.It is a different experience to me; I had never play basketball before and also had never gone to Mongolia before.So eve
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After nearly 3 or 4 mouth basketball practice,in 12th of February our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS.It is a different experience to me; I had never play basketball before and also had never gone to Mongolia before.So everything for me was just very interesting.
The day before we went to Mongolia,I heard a lot of people said that Mongolia was very cold and about minus 30 degrees,so I brought a lot of warm jacket,it is actually very useful.In the morning of 12th of February we went to china airport,but unfortunately the flight was delay,so we just stay at airport hotel for several hours.If we knew the plane was going delay,we could just finish that day’s classes then went to airport.
Finally we got Mongolia; it was freezing cold and was snowing.We went to international school of Ulaanbaatar which was the school hosted ACAMIS,our host family pick us in the school.My host family is Indian,they were very nice and kind to me and I was really like my host family.The next day of Mongolia we had our first game,but we had bad luck because we just 1 or 2 point lose that game.And the games came after we all lose it,I think it is because they were so good and they all played basketball for few years and our team just make up few month ago.This was little bit disappoint,but we all had fun during this day,so it was enough.We just need more practice and after 1 or 2 years we will beat them again.
The last day we went a mall to buy souvenirs,it was interesting and we left it was normal,the flight didn’t delay.We came back to China at six or seven and prepared the next day’s classes.My felling was so TIRED…
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帮我改改语法什么的After nearly 3 or 4 mouth basketball practice,in 12th of February our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS.It is a different experience to me; I had never play basketball before and also had never gone to Mongolia before.So eve
After nearly 3 or 4 months basketball practice, on February 12, our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS. It was a different experience to me. I had never played basketball before and also had never gone to Mongolia before. So everything for me was just very interesting.
The day before we went to Mongolia, I heard a lot of people say that Mongolia was very cold and about minus 30 degree, so I brought a lot of warm jackets, they were actually very useful. In the morning of February 12, we went to China Airport. But unfortunately the flight was delayed, so we just stayed at airport hotel for several hours. If we knew the plane was going to delay, we could just finish that day’s classes before going to airport.
Finally we got Mongolia; it was freezingly cold and was snowing. We went to international school of Ulaanbaatar which was the school who hosted ACAMIS, our host family pick us in the school. My host family are Indian. they were very nice and kind to me and I liked my host family. The second day of Mongolia we had our first game, but we had bad luck because we just 1 (2) point lose that game. And the games came after that we all lost, I think it is because they played so well and they all played basketball for a few years and our team just was made up a few month ago. This was a little disappointments, but we all had fun during this day, so it was enough. We just need more practice and after 1 or 2 years we will beat them.
The last day we went to a mall to buy souvenirs. it was interesting and we left. it was normal, the flight didn’t delay. We came back to China at about six and prepared the next day’s classes. i felt tired

After nearly 3 or 4 mouths' basketball practice, on 12th February our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS. It was a different experience to me; I had never played basketball before and also had never bee...

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After nearly 3 or 4 mouths' basketball practice, on 12th February our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS. It was a different experience to me; I had never played basketball before and also had never been to Mongolia before. So everything for me was just very interesting.
The day before we went to Mongolia, I heard a lot of people saying that Mongolia was very cold and about minus 30 degrees, so I brought a lot of warm jackets, it was actually very useful. In the morning of 12th February we went to china airport, but unfortunately, the flight was delaied, so we just stayed at airport hotel for several hours. If we knew the plane was going to be late, we could just finish that day's classes before we went to airport.
Finally we got to Mongolia; it was freezing cold and was snowing. We went to international school of Ulaanbaatar which was the school hosted ACAMIS, our host family picked us in the school. My host family was Indian. The families were very nice and kind to me, and I really liked my host family. The next day in Mongolia we had our first game, but we had bad luck because we were just 1 or 2 point losing that game. And so did the games that came after. I think it was because they were so good and they all played basketball for few years and our team were made up just few months ago. This was little bit disappointed, but we all had fun during these days, so that was enough. We just need more practice, and after 1 or 2 years we will finaly beat them.
The last day we went to a mall to buy souvenirs, it was interesting and we left it was normal, the flight didn’t delay. We came back to China at six or seven and prepared the next day’s classes. And I was so TIRED…
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