Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree disagree?In present-day society,there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether university should accept equal numb

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree disagree?In present-day society,there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether university should accept equal numb
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree disagree?
In present-day society,there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether university should accept equal numbers of male and female in every subject.Some assert that since people advocate equality all the time,they also make it equal in number of sex of every subject while many others,including me ,argue that sex difference should be concerned in different subject.In this essay,I will compare and contrast two typical opinions regarding this debate.
It is evidently reasonable for some to argue that different subjects should be put into different numbers of gender.The main reason for this is the characteristic of each subject itself.As we know,some subjects like architecture,education and math have their own special method of thinking which leads to the sex demands among them.Men maybe have strong logicality,so that they are more appropriate to attend the science course.As a consequence,women are filled with emotion,patience and carefulness; these factors determine that women dominate in art course.Otherwise,the physical demands.Men have priority in term of physic ,they are taller,stronger that have capacity to attend some special subjects ,like army school ,physical and sports school .For instance ,I as well as my brother are keen on swimming,therefore we attended a sport course together.However,almost every time we had a test ,he passed it without any difficulty ,by contrast,I were always below 60.More precisely,the physical factor is one of the most considerable factors each subject should focus on.Additionally,employment is another reason.What we can always see on the notice board of employment is the demands:only for men or only for women,because employers think that men or women can do this work better,hence,that affects the numbers of gender in different subjects.
Admittedly,some individuals argue that,numbers of male and female should be equal in every subject.Apparently they want to emphasize that equality must be reflected in everything,therefore,subject is not an exception.It is the discrimination if differences exist in numbers of male and female when schools choose the students.Apart from that,they convince that women can do as well as men do and the other way round is also tenable,e.g.,history has consistently shown that women can do as men,Hua mulan in China is a good example to prove this view.Lastly,in the information era.Computerization and digitization compensate the disadvantages between men and women.
On the basis of the above factors.I would concede that gender equality should be considered in subjects .Despite that ,we cannot avoid the different characteristics among subjects .Overall,I am convinced that school should recognize the differences when choose the gender of students .

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree disagree?In present-day society,there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether university should accept equal numb
1 第一段都是模板,具体表现力不强,生硬.如果在前几年考试,这是上等作文,但现在不是了,有很多句子显得很牵强,如since people advocate equality all the time,they also make it equal in number of sex of every subject ,在使用木板的过程中,由于语言功底,不可避免地出现了语法错误.而语法错误（in the number of female students and male students in some subjects）又突出了模板的存在.
2 It is evidently reasonable for some to argue that different subjects should be put into different numbers of gender.依旧模板,可以说that之前都是没有用的东西,不是it is evidently reasonably that 这个句型不好,而是这个结构出现在这里就是地道的模板.后面 把谁放进谁里面?弄混了.
3 architecture,education and math 难道真的男生就比女生好吗?特别是education,用词大,所有的学科都是education.
4 As a consequence 结果是,用在此处当然不恰当.in contrast,好!
5 Otherwise,the physical demands.Men have priority in term of physic ,they are taller,stronger that have capacity to attend some special subjects ,like army school ,physical and sports school 说的乱,太晚了 就不给你改了.
6 For instance ,I as well as my brother are keen on swimming,therefore we attended a sport course together.However,almost every time we had a test ,he passed it without any difficulty ,by contrast,I were always below 60.这个例子的出现为你的模板作文挽回了0.5分啊!写作就要用实实在在的细节信息!
7 the physical factor is one of the most considerable factors each subject should focus on.语法问题,谓语动词冲突
8 Additionally,employment is another reason.What we can always see on the notice board of employment is the demands:only for men or only for women,because employers think that men or women can do this work better,hence,that affects the numbers of gender in different subjects.
这一部分是表现,不是原因,用它论证,不妥!
总体：
1 本文论述没有力度,也许是由于模板的存在 .文章格式很好,但语言不好,论述不利.
2 语法有一些问题.如果不是模板,那么考官会忽略这些语法问题.但正是使用了模板,模板的句子个个很酷,但非模板句多数出现问题,这回令考官反感.
3 思想上,本文支持平等,支持男女不按平均数量来划分,所以第二段很长,第三段很短.而且第三段的理由又是那么的强势或强硬,以至于别人明显能看出你挑了一个别人的不太好的论点来说,这样就会导致读者不信服.而且并不是第二段长,第三段短,就能证明你第二段好,你要去反驳第三段,才能观点统一.
4 最后,如果我来写这,我会在every subject做文章,去否定,并不是所有的subject都equal.有的需要分,有的不需要分.而且不需要分的要多一些.而本文第二段说不分,第三段说分,没有交叉感,这样写逻辑性不强.不会得高分.
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