帮我改改语法错误～Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue .All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a popule

帮我改改语法错误～Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue .All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a popule
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Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue .All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a populer city ,I think you should visit to there .There are many ways of traveling such as by plane,by train,by car and people can choose any of ways of traveling if they like.you can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!

帮我改改语法错误～Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue .All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a popule
Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.[这句话两套主谓,少连词 改法1：将it改为which——定于从句.改法2：it前“,”改为“.”i大写]The water is clear and the sky is blue.All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a populer city ,[同第一句错误一样 改法1逗号改称句号 改法2：在逗号后加where 表示前一句在从句作地点状语 I think you should visit to there .（to应该去掉) There are many ways of traveling(也可写作travelling 英美用法) such as by plane,by train,by car and people can choose any of ways of traveling[前面已经提过 of travelling 省去更好] if they like.you [y大写]can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!
不知道你现在上几年级 不过要是高中作文显得水平不是很高 要是初中就比较好 从句运用不够熟练 不过有几处写的不错[if you like 这个省略句用得很好]

"island"后应加"in China"，"all the year round"可改为"all year long"，"long beaches"可改为"golden beaches"。

line 1 clear => clean
line 2 blue => clear
You can find many coconut palm trees all year round there, and you can go to tthe long beach to do some watersports as well.
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line 1 clear => clean
line 2 blue => clear
You can find many coconut palm trees all year round there, and you can go to tthe long beach to do some watersports as well.
line 4 i think you should visit there => I recommend you visit there
line 5 travelling => reaching there
line 6 if they like => they want

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1.........in China.在那最大
2.The water is clean,the sky is blue,and there are many palm trees all the year aroud.说风景的
3.You can do some watersports on the long beaches.动词挨着
4.........,I think...

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1.........in China.在那最大
2.The water is clean,the sky is blue,and there are many palm trees all the year aroud.说风景的
3.You can do some watersports on the long beaches.动词挨着
4.........,I think you may visit there.副词前无TO
5.there are many ways of traveling to go there,such as ...去那的
6.People can choose any of ways if they like.多余的去掉

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Hainai is a beautiful place.It is the second largest island in China.The water is clean,the sky is blue and there are lots of palm trees by the beach.You can watch beatiful sunset on the beach.You als...

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Hainai is a beautiful place.It is the second largest island in China.The water is clean,the sky is blue and there are lots of palm trees by the beach.You can watch beatiful sunset on the beach.You also can play water sports on the beach.Hainai is a awesome place to visit.It has wonderful scenery and yummy seafood.You can take areoplane car train to here.If you go to China.You should go to Hainai too.It shows another style of life here.
Hainai,what a wonderful place,is waiting for you guys visiting~

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Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue . there are many coconut palm trees,and you can(walk) on the long beaches (and)do some watersports.Ha...

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Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue . there are many coconut palm trees,and you can(walk) on the long beaches (and)do some watersports.Hainan is a populer(改成popular) city , I think you should visit to (删除to)there . There are many ways of traveling(改成travelling) such as by plane, by train, by car and people can choose any of(删除of) ways(改成way) of traveling if(改成which) they like.you can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!

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1The water is clean and the sky is blue.
2you can on the long beaches to do some watersports
3 I think you should visit there