急,求修改语法（仅仅是语法,如果有什么不懂,可以联系我450615164,Before having interviews with clients,I thought that interview means having conversation with others and so I get to know them.After three interviews done now,I chan

急,求修改语法（仅仅是语法,如果有什么不懂,可以联系我450615164,Before having interviews with clients,I thought that interview means having conversation with others and so I get to know them.After three interviews done now,I chan
急,求修改语法（仅仅是语法,如果有什么不懂,可以联系我450615164,
Before having interviews with clients,I thought that interview means having conversation with others and so I get to know them.After three interviews done now,I changed my opinion to it and there are some of my strengths and weaknesses.For each interview,I had a good introduction.I introduced myself,explained the purpose of doing the interviews and explained the process and setting of the interview.Appropriate body language was given during the interviews such as smiling and nodding.Eye contact was always maintained while I was talking with the clients.By showing those proper body language,I showed my respect to them and encourage them to talk with me.I spoke gently and warmly and so they did not feel nervous,but my caring and friendly.Every times,I closed my interviews by saying appreciation of their sharing stories with me and their precious advice for improving my upcoming interviews.
Through communicating with the clients and getting feedback from my colleagues and clients,I improved a lot.At the first interview,I noticed that how I was nervous to communicate and what impression I left to my client.The client noticed I was not confident enough.When I was doing my second and third interview,I tried my best to relax by practicing my introduction and taking deep breath.By doing these,I was more calm and confident to interview my following clients.The felt my confidence,friendliness,interest and caring during the interviews.With feedback from my second client,I noticed that I needed to speak up and pronounce more clearly.Thus,I practiced my questions and focused with my pronunciation with practicing introduction so that my clients can understand my introduction and my questions.Meanwhile,I noticed I have better paying attention on information that clients mentioned so that I can extract questions from that.Therefore,clients can feel my understanding on their concerns and my interest.
I did learn a lot from these interviews and feedbacks.I know that it is not just a conversation with patients in any clinical setting.I have to pay attention on what they are talking about so I can ask questions about them and they feel my interest and my understanding.I have to maintain appropriate body language to show my respect,encouragement and caring so that patients feel they are encouraged and they want to talk with me.

急,求修改语法（仅仅是语法,如果有什么不懂,可以联系我450615164,Before having interviews with clients,I thought that interview means having conversation with others and so I get to know them.After three interviews done now,I chan
Before having interviews with clients,I thought the interview is just having conversation with others and i get some knowledge of them.but after the interviews,I changed my opinion of view,and i find some of my strengths and weaknesses through the interview.For each interview,I had good introduction,I introduced myself carefully,explained the purpose of the interviews and the process and setting of the interview.apparently body language was important,such as a smiling and nodding; eye contact was always maintained as while I was talking with the clients.By using a correct body language,I showed the respect to them from me and encourage them to talk to me.I try to speak gently and carefully,so they won't feel nervous,just my caring and friendly.Every time,I finished my interviews by saying "appreciation for you to sharing your stories with me and give me your precious advice to help me to improving my upcoming interviews."
Through communicating with the clients,also getting the feedback from my colleagues and clients,I improved a lot in the way of how i interview.At the first interview,I noticed how I get nervous to communicate and what impression I left to my client.The client was noticed I wasn't confident enough,then i try to make a change,and then for the second and third one,I tried my best to relax by practicing my introduction and taking deep breath,by doing those,I was getting calm and confident of interview in my following clients.
Then with my confidence,friendliness,interest speaking and caring during the interviews,i get the feedback from my second client,I noticed that I need to speak up and pronounce more clearly.Thus,I practiced my questions and focused with my pronunciation with practicing introduction so that my clients can understand what is the conversation is going to be.Meanwhile,I noticed I have to paying attention on information that clients mentioned so that I can extract questions from that.Therefore,clients can feel my understanding on their concerns and my interest.
I did learn a lot from these interviews and feedbacks.I know that it is not just a conversation with patients in any clinical setting.I have to be a good listener so I can ask questions to follow they line and makes it feel smooth,also they can feel my interest on their speaking and shows my diathesis,and as i already said,i maintain appropriate body language to showing my respect,encouragement and caring so that patients feel they are encouraged and they want to talk with me.
that's the summary of what i learned though all the interview i was been going through
不容易啊!,可以的话,多给点吧,看在我用了差不多30分钟帮你一句看清楚还加了一句总结

Before having interviews with clients（Before starting the interview with clients), I thought that interview means having conversation with others and so I get to know them(I thought it was a conversat...

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Before having interviews with clients（Before starting the interview with clients), I thought that interview means having conversation with others and so I get to know them(I thought it was a conversation.with some people whom I would get to know) After three interviews done now( Now, after three interviews), I changed my opinion to it and there are some of my strengths and weaknesses( I changed my mind because I had found some strengths and weaknesses from myself) . For each interview, I had a good introduction. I introduced myself, (and )explained the purpose of doing the interview(s), and (I) explained (how to prepare) the the interview. I have used some body language during the interviews such as smiling and nodding. Eye contact was always maintained (when) I was talking with the clients. By using body language, I (have) showed my respect to them, and encourage them to talk with me. I spoke gently and warmly, so they did not feel nervous. I finished each of my interview with an appreciation for their sharing with me, and their precious advices for improving my upcoming interviews.
Through communicating with clients and getting feedback from my colleagues and clients, I improved a lot. At the first interview, I noticed that I was nervous to talk, and I have seen the impression which I left to my client who thought I was not confident enough. When I made my second and third interview, I tried my best to relax by practicing my introduction and taking deep breath. By doing these, I got more calmed and confident to interview other clients. Then they felt my confidence, friendliness, interests and caring during the interviews with them. With feedback from my second client, I found that I needed to speak louder and pronounce more clearly. Thus, I practiced my questions, focused on my pronunciation, and practiced introduction so that my clients could understand my introduction and my questions very well. Meanwhile, I paid attention to the information which clients mentioned, so that I can extract questions from that. Therefore, my clients could feel my understanding on their concerns .I did learned a lot from these interviews and the feedback of interviews. I knew that it was not just a conversation with the patient in a clinic.I had to pay attention on what they were talking about so I could ask questions , which made them to feel my interests and my understanding.
几个大问题：1。标点符号--请再复习英语的逗号和句号如何处理。 2。动词时态 ，注意时态变化 3。表达方式，请使用正确的表述，即使是简单的句子，也必用错从句强。 4 尽量减少重复使用同一个动词，比如，你使用了很多 noticed,这个词可以找到很多替换词，比如 found saw ,observed , realized, knew .... 5.注意多使用从句，使得句子看上去更漂亮。

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